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Nowdays many people eat everything.there are fat and fell bad with this and started prepare diet because they want be slimmer and beautifull.In 21 century diet is a normal things which is used of 60% society.I think that diet is usefull for our haelth.

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Nowdays many people eat everything. (zdanie jest ok, ale 'everything' to znaczy dokladnie co? psy? koty? inne zwierzeta? kamienie?)

'there' (to jest zle slowo, bo to co napisales to jest. Tam jest tluszcz, a chciales napisac ONI - to jest THEY) are fat and 'fell' (zly czas) bad with this and 'started' (czas teraz) 'prepare' (niepotr) dietING because they want TO be slimmer and 'beautifull' (ortog). In THE 21 century dietING is a normal 'things' (tutaj l. poj) which is 'used of' CARRIED OUT BY 60% OF society.I think that dietING is 'usefull' (ortog) for our 'haelth' (ortog).