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It was nasty day...
I was a week at ski camp. And today I was going back home.
And at home I discover that my mam is really sick, she have cancer...
I began cry when she told me that. It was terrible information. I don't know what I can do.
My mam looks like she was clam. But I think that she's really scared and I don't know how I can help she. In home is tense atmosphere. We all are sad and we almost don't talk to each other.
My dad looks like the most scared of each other. I fell helpless.
I'm scared to, but I believe that everything will be ok.
I will end and go sleep, because I'm really tired.
Good bye my diray.
DEAR DIARY,
It was nasty day... /I had a bad day today./
I was AT a weekLONG at ski camp. And today I was going back RETURNED home.
And at home I discover have learnt that my mam is really sick, she have cancer...
I began TO cry when she told me that. It was terrible information NEWS. I don't know what I can AM GOING TO do.
My mam looks like she was clam. But I think that she's really scared and I don't know how I can help she. In AT home THERE A is tense atmosphere. We ARE all are sad and we almost don't talk to each other.
My dad looks like SCARED the most scared of each other. I fell helpless.
I'm scared to, but I believe that everything will be ok.
I will end FINISH NOW and go TO sleep, because I'm really tired.
Good bye NIGHT my diray.

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edytowany przez fui_eu: 16 kwi 2011
Mialo byc SEEMS po 'My dad ...'
chyba małą literówka: At home THERE IS a tense atmosphere. W tej kolejności: )
Right you are.

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