Prośba o sprawdzenie LISTU do ciotki ;D

Dear Angelika
I have a big problem ,because I had an argument with my new girlfriend. I forgot her birthday(tuaj nie wiem czy jest dobrze chodziło mi o to że się pokłóciłem z dziewczyną). My girlfriend is a very beautiful women. She is slim and athletic. Her hair's long and blonde. She has blue eyes and beautiful smile. She is similar to the british model Imogen Potts. She has 16 years old and she live in Zambrow. Now I feel terrible.I have not slept for three days and just think about her. She is everything to me and I can not live without it.
Could you please give me some advice?What should I do ?Should I buy her a gift and apologize? I am looking forward your important advise.

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"She is similar to the british model" she looks like..
"She has 16 years old" - she is
"she live in Zambrow" - 3os
"and I can not live without it"bez tego?
"I am looking forward TO your important advise - important nie jest tu dobrym słowem jeśli już koniecznie chcesz użyć jakiegoś przymiotnika to moze 'helpful'

pick a quarrel with somebody- kłócić się z kimś
woman- kobieta
She is 16 years old
She is similar to the british model Imogen Potts( a tak dokładniej, o co Ci chodziło??
she lives in Zambrow- 3 os l/ poj/ dodajemy s lub es, w zd. oznajmujących
I'm feeling terrible, now
I can't stop thinking about her. może tak? :)
She's everything to me and I can't live without her
Could you give me some advice please?
popraw literówki! :)

Trzyma to sie wg kupy??

she looks similar...

co znaczy 'wg kupy'?

Maybe the asker wants to know 'if this is consistent with the matter that comes through the bowels' ?

or 'does it have BM consistency'...

or ..after BM consistency , when it comes out to fertilize the fields..

Inaczej czy tekst jest spójny.

Oh I see, now I know, in other words , you really are what you eat..

W tym zdaniu similar chodziło mi że jest podobna do aktorki Imogen Potts. :D

@Sav - perfect! :D

@fineliner - to napisałem: 'looks similar'