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US unemployment rate drops to lowest level since 2009.

The US unemployment rate fell to 7.8 percent last month, dropping below 8 percent for the first time in nearly four years.
The rate declined because more people found work and could have an impact on undecided voters in the final month before the presidential election.
The US Labor Department said employers added 114,000 jobs in September. The economy also created 86,000 more jobs in July and August than first estimated. Wages rose in September and more people started looking for work.
The revisions show employers added 146,000 jobs per month from July through September.
The unemployment rate fell from 8.1 percent in August, matching its level in January 2009, when Obama took office. The decline could help Obama.
Stock futures rose modestly after the report. The yield on the 10-year U.S. Treasury note climbed to 1.73 percent from 1.68 percent just before the report, a sign that investors were more willing to embrace risk and move money from bonds into stocks.
Jobs have been added for 24 straight months. There are now 325,000 more than when Obama took office.
The September gains were led by the health care industry, which added 44,000 jobs - the most since February. Transportation and warehousing also showed large gains. The revisions showed that governments actually added 63,000 jobs in July and August, compared with earlier estimates that showed losses.
Still, many of the jobs added last month were part time. The number of people with part-time jobs who wanted full-time work rose 7.5 percent to 8.6 million.
The US unemployment rate fell to 7.8 'percent' (genersalnie uzywamy %) last month, dropping below 8 'percent' for the first time in nearly four years.
The rate declined because more people found work 'and could' (tutaj nie jest za jasno, brakuje slowa, albo zmien inne) have an impact on (cos brak) undecided voters in the final month before the presidential election.
The unemployment rate fell from 8.1 'percent' in August, matching its level in January 2009, when Obama took office.
The yield on the 10-year U.S. Treasury note climbed to 1.73 'percent' from 1.68 'percent' just before the report, a sign that investors were more willing to embrace risk and move money from bonds into stocks.
Jobs have been added (tutaj wg mnie cos brak) for 24 straight months.
The number of people with part-time jobs who wanted full-time work rose 7.5 'percent' to 8.6 million.
...percent nie piszemy w calosci, tylko %