You wrote me that you put on weight 'and' (to zdanie niema sensu, daj 'but' (ale) you want (cos brak) be slim. I am glad that you asked me 'fot' (ortog) advice.
Do not worry, certainly (tutaj można dodac, 'with my help') you (cos brak) lose the weight.
First you need go to a doctor and 'do' (nie, to jest za bardzo potocne, lepiej..have blood tests done) blood tests. You have to drink mineral water, because it will clean (ale czyj? trzeba dodac) organism of harmful substances.
You should eat 'fruits' (l. poj) and many vegetables. Do not eat many sweets, because (cos brak) contain a lot of sugar.
If you can, 'You' (dlaczego duza litera?) 'will' (zle slowo) ride a bike to school.
I promise that 'i' (dlaczego mala litera, jak wszyscy pisza duza?) will support you and if you want I (cos brak) write to you (cos brak) other tips.
Please 'notify' (za wysokie slowo, tutaj ..let me know) me about your progress.