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EDUCATION
1) Silesian University of Technology
Faculty Of Mining And Geology
Department Of Mineral Processing And Waste Utilization

The planned title of engineer: February 2014

Specialization prepares graduates for management companies escapes mineral resources subject to international trade (coal , ores , salts , sulfur , etc.) and resources of national or local ( building stone , road , limestone , etc.) .
Training for this specialty is so extremely wide and combined with the development of leadership skills to get the professional qualifications to steer diversified mining activities.

Graduates acquire a thorough knowledge of the techniques of solid mineral exploitation . Obtained this knowledge by studying a wide variety of technical subjects , such as geology , mineralogy, petrography , mining geophysics , rock mechanics , mine surveying , engineering underground and opencast operation , elimination of excavation , mining and drilling equipment . electrical engineering and automation , environmental protection , waste mining , as well as the study of social sciences including organization of work, economy , job security , combating the risks of mining , mining law , environmental development , etc.

Preparing for solving engineering problems involves extensive use of computer techniques and methods . A graduate can apply for jobs in underground mines coal , ores and other minerals , as well as companies waste by mining companies and civil engineering using mining techniques in the construction of buildings .

2) Katowice School of Economics (KSE) High Educational Institution
Bachelor degree of Tourism and Recreation
3) Technical secondary school of construction engineering in Chorzow

Experience

1) Kotrak Limited Liability Company in Katowice – Property Management
Referent on technical issues – supervision of renovations performed on property according to renovations plans.

2) Stavbau Limited Liability Company in Bytom
Referent on technical issues – carrying out construction, supervision of employees, supply of construction materials, cooperation with subcontractor.
Cost Estimation – preparation of cost estimates, budgeting and calculation of expenditure according to the estimate.

3) ZK PGM National Company in Chorzow
Referent on technical issues – supervision on repair of apartments in the municipal resource in Chorzow.
Cost Estimation – preparation of cost estimates, budgeting and calculation of expenditure according to the estimate.

4) Daldrop + Dr.Ing.Huber GmbH + Co. KG in Ireland
Manual worker – we are specialized in designing and constructing cleanroom plants, consisting of air-conditioning and control plants as well as cleanroom floor, wall and ceiling systems.
Telescopic handler driver - driving a car for the duration of the contract.

5) Axapack Limited Liability Company in Swietochlowice
Company specializing in secure packages in containers.
Project Manager – monitoring of the work of packing and corrosion protection package in metal containers prepared for sea and air transport.

OTHER LANGUAGE
english - good level in spoken and written

Additional skills
driving licence category B
Norma Pro computer program
AutoCad computer program
MS Office computer program

Interested
Mining, Graphics, Cycling, Interior design.

english - good level in spoken and written
abstrahując od tego, że to jest źle,
teraz się używa raczej europejskiego systemu, o którym możesz sobie przeczytać tu: http://pl.wikipedia.org/wiki/Poziom_bieg%C5%82o%C5%9Bci_j%C4%99zykowej
(i słusznie, bo twoje good, to nie jest moje good, itd.)

Czy ktoś na forum jest w stanie wskazać moje błędy ? Gorąca Prośba

POZDRAWIAM

To się bardziej kwalifikuje do zlecenia jakiemuś tłumaczowi.

Nie wszystkie bnledy ale:

EDUCATION
1) Silesian University of Technology (tutaj potrzeba Miasto i Kraj)
Faculty Of Mining And Geology - Department Of Mineral Processing And Waste Utilization

'The planned title of engineer' (tego calkowicie nie lubie' (tutaj trzeba 'Expected graduation - February 2014
(nie wiem czy taki dokladny opis ma miejsce w CV - to wiecej w motivation letter)
Specialization prepares graduates for 'management companies escapes' (tego nie rozumiem albo brak slow) mineral resources subject to international trade (coal, ores, salts, sulfur ,'etc.' (nie rozumiem jaki to metal jest to 'etc') and resources of national or local ( building stone , road , limestone , 'etc.' (nie pisz tego 'etc - to nic nie znaczy- nie mozna oczekiwac zeby czytajacy sie domyslal) .
Training for this specialty is 'so' (niepotr) extremely wide and combined with the development of leadership skills 'to get' (calkowicie nie pasuje tutaj - jest na niskim poziomie, tutaj trzeba slowa akademickie ...) the professional qualifications to steer (kogo? czego? brakuje) diversified mining activities.

Graduates acquire a thorough knowledge of the techniques of solid mineral exploitation . (kto? co?) Obtained this knowledge by studying a wide variety of technical subjects , such as geology , mineralogy, petrography, mining geophysics, rock mechanics, mine surveying, engineering underground and opencast operation, elimination of excavation, mining and drilling equipment . electrical engineering and automation , environmental protection , waste mining , as well as the study of social sciences including organization of work, economy , job security , combating the risks of mining , mining law , environmental development , etc.

'Preparing' (zla czesc mowy) for solving engineering problems involves extensive use of computer techniques and methods .
....A graduate can apply for jobs in underground mines coal , ores and other minerals , as well as companies waste by mining companies and civil engineering using mining techniques in the construction of buildings .....to jest prosto z innego zrodla - takich rzeczy nie piszemy w CV.

'2)' (nie rozumiem dlaczego dales tutaj (2) Katowice School of Economics (KSE) High Educational Institution...tutaj trzeba miasto i kraj
'Bachelor degree' BA' 'of' IN Tourism and Recreation
3) Technical secondary school - construction engineering in Chorzow, (a kraj?)

WORK Experience
.......podajemy od ostatniego do pierwszego i dajemy dokladne daty - tutaj nie moge zgadywac gdzie najpierw pracowales i jak dlugo....to trzeba dokladnie napisac.

1) Kotrak Limited Liability Company in Katowice, (podaj kraj) – Property Management
Referent on technical issues – supervision of renovations performed on property according to renovations plans.

2) Stavbau Limited Liability Company in Bytom, (kraj)
Referent on technical issues – carrying out construction, supervision of (napisz ile) employees, supply of construction materials, cooperation with subcontractorS.
Cost Estimation – preparation of cost estimates, budgeting and 'calculation' (to jest zle slowo, bo co robiles to 'porownywales jedno do drugiego') of expenditure 'according' (zle slowo) to the estimate.

3) ZK PGM National Company in Chorzow, (kraj)
Referent on technical issues – supervision on repair of apartments 'in the municipal resource' (tego nie lubie, trzeba to inaczej) in Chorzow.
Cost Estimation – preparation of cost estimates, budgeting and 'calculation of expenditure according to the estimate' (jak wyzej - napisz to dokladniej.

4) Daldrop + Dr.Ing.Huber GmbH + Co. KG in Ireland
'Manual' (poszukaj lepsze slowo) worker – 'we are' (po co to?) specialized in designing and constructing' (co mi tu to nie siedzi - daj to inaczej) cleanroom plants, consisting of air-conditioning and control plants as well as cleanroom floor, wall and ceiling systems.
Telescopic handler driver - 'driving a car for the duration of the contract' (tego nie trzeba pisac).

5) Axapack Limited Liability Company in Swietochlowice, (kraj)
Company specializing in secure packages in containers.
Project Manager – monitoring 'of' (niepotr) the work of packing and corrosion protection package in metal containers BEING prepared for sea and air transport.

'OTHER' (nie trzeba) LANGUAGE
English - 'good level' (tutaj trzeba napisac egzaminy ktore zdales) in spoken and written

Additional skills
driving licence category B
'Norma Pro computer program
AutoCad computer program
MS Office computer program' (napisz to inaczej...Computer programs: Norma Pro, AutoCad...)

'Interested' (zla czesc mowy - tutaj trzeba rzeczownika Interests
Mining, Graphics, Cycling, Interior design.