ESSAY - the pros and cons of *proszę o sprawdzenie

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
Jest to krótkie wypracowanie, na temat pracy lekarza. Prosze o sprawdzenie i wskazanie ewentualnych błędów. Z gory bardzo dziękuję za pomoc.

THE PROS ANS CONS OF WORKING AS A DOCTOR
Some people see it an ordinary job while others think it is an exciting and interesting carrer. Whatever your views, there is no doubt that working as a doctor is a demanding job wiht many advantages and disadventages.
There are serval arguments in favour of working as a doctor. To begin with, it's a rwarding job because there is always a demand for people to treat the sick or injured. Furthermore, doctors are rarely out of work because they help sick or injured people to recover.
However, there are also a number of disadvantages to being a doctor. Firstlt, it's a tiring job, because they work shifts and often work at night. In addition, it can be depressing because they often see people suffering.
To conclude, I believe that, although being a doctor can be difficult at times, it's worth it. It's gets very job satisfaction, when they help a lots of injured people.
> Some people CONSIDER it an ordinary job while others think it is an
>exciting and interesting carrer.
disadventages. - ortogr

Furthermore, doctors are rarely
>out of work because they help sick or injured people to recover.

to zdanie jest troche nielogiczne: oczekiwalbym stwierdzenia 'poniewaz choroba nie jest czyms rzadkim' itp.

Firstlt, it's a tiring job, because they (napisalbym DOCTORS, bo 'they' nie odnosi sie do zadnego slowa z poprzedniego zdania) work shifts and often
>work at night.


>difficult at times, it's(9MOŻNA UŻYWAĆ SKRÓTÓW?) worth it.

It's gets very job satisfaction, - niegramatyczne
>when they help a lots of injured people. - a lots niegramatyczne
Bardzo dziękuje :)

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