prosba o sprawdzenie;)

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czy mogłby ktos sprawdzic moj list z angielskiego??? Z gory wieleki dzieki:)
o to i on:
I am writing with regard to your advertisement which appeared In Wyborcza newspaper on 10 October. I would like to apply for the position of protector on the summer’s camp of teenagers in USA.
As you see from the enclosed CV I am studying pedagogic the University in Szczecin.
I have a good experience because last holiday I worked in summer’s camp in London.
I would like to apply for this work because I very like working with teenagers. I have a good relationship with people. I am very responsible and hard working person. I have good organization skills and I would like to face new challenges.
I would be very grateful if you would consider my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Your sincerely,
XYZ

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