Proszę o sprawdzenie meila na jutro. Bardzo proszę

Na jutro mam napisac meila wg planu. Mam np powiedziec o 3 rzeczecahc jakie zrobilam w czasie Past simple. I ktorych nie zrobilam w Present perfect. Tam gdzie jest pytajnik nie mam pojecia czy jest dobrze. Prosze o sprawdzenie.

Hi Oliver
Im having a great? time in London. The wheather is brilliants. Its hot and sunny.
On friday i bought lost of souvenirs. On saturday I took a ride on the London Eye. I saw most interesting of all building.
Yesterday I took a coach tour of the city. It was great/i m having a good time?
I hanent visited the tower of London yet? and British Museum. I havent seen the queen yet-I's? doing that tomorrow.
Im coming home on Thursday.
Look forward to seeing you.

nazwy dni tygodnia wielka litera.

The weather is brilliant
Its havent Im - wstaw apostrofy
lost [literowka] of souvenirs.
I saw most interesting of all building. - co to mialo znaczyc

I'm going to do that tomorrow. - taki masz plan

znaki zapytania mozesz usunac, jest ok.

I saw most interesting of all building. - widzialam wiele ciekawych budynkow. A w I'm going to do it tomorrow. Bedzie that czy it?
I czy przy zdaniach przeczacych , moze byc : and seen the queen yet.