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Rehabilitation of Criminals in America


Prison inmates, are some of the most ³maladjusted² people in society. Most of the inmates have
had too little discipline or too much, come from broken homes, and have no self-esteem. They are very
insecure and are ³at war with themselves as well as with society² (Szumski 20). Most inmates did not
learn moral values or learn to follow everyday norms. Also, when most lawbreakers are labeled criminals
they enter the phase of secondary deviance. They will admit they are criminals or believe it when they
enter the phase of secondary deviance (Doob 171).
Next, some believe that if we want to rehabilitate criminals we must do more than just send them
to prison. For instance, we could give them a chance to acquire job skills; which will improve the
chances that inmates will become productive citizens upon release. The programs must aim to change those
who want to change. Those who are taught to produce useful goods and to be productive are ³likely to
develop the self-esteem essential to a normal, integrated personality² (Szumski 21). This kind of
program would provide skills and habits and ³replace the sense of hopelessness² that many inmates have
(Szumski 21).
Prison inmates, are some of the most ³maladjusted² people in society. Most of the inmates have had too little discipline or too much, come from broken homes, and have no self-esteem. They are very insecure and are ³at war with themselves as well as with society² (Szumski 20). Most inmates did not learn{tu lepiej: PRESENT PERFECT} moral values or learn{PRESENT PERFECT} to follow everyday norms. Also, when most lawbreakers are labeled {LABELLED} {"}criminals{"}{,}
they enter the phase of secondary deviance{,}{WHERE} T{t}hey will admit they are criminals or believe it {BEZ:when they enter the phase of secondary deviance - UNNECESSARY REPETITION} (Doob 171).
Next, some believe that if we want to rehabilitate criminals{,} we must do more than just send them to prison. For instance, we could give them a chance to acquire job skills{COMMA, not semi-colon} which will improve the
chances that inmates will become productive citizens upon release. The programs must aim to change those who want to change. Those who are taught to produce useful goods and to be productive are ³likely to develop the self-esteem essential to {a nie: FOR?} a normal, integrated personality² (Szumski 21). This kind of program would provide {THE} skills and habits and ³replace the sense of hopelessness² that many inmates have {OFTEN FEEL??}
(Szumski 21).
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Most of the inmates - bez: OF THE
mowa o "inmates" ogolnie, a nie o konkretnej grupie
>Prison inmates, are some

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