Moim zadaniem było napisanie opowiadania kończącego się słowami ' Fortunately,it all ended wall,but I dread to think what might love happend' . Miałam użyc czasów : past simple,past continous i past perfect,ale jestem z tym totalnie ciemna,chociaż czytałam kiedy którego czasu powinnon się użyc.
Bardzo serdecznie proszę o pomoc i poprawienie błędów,poprawienie na odpowiedni czas. Jeżeli uważacie,że coś jest zbędne-powiedzcie,bo miało byc max.250 słów,a jest chyba trochę więcej. Z GÓRY DZIĘKUJĘ :)
It was a night in August. The sun was shining,but the wind was blowing. I'm and my friend Sarah had been siting in home and we very bored. Suddenly Sarah had invented about we go to the swim in pond. Because we boring,i agree.
I said my old brother,Lucas,about I'm go for walk to the pond with Sarah. He was be suprised and said is dark and advised us,that we didn't fall into the water,because it is not the time for swimming,but we just laughed at him and we said to him that he is boring and we've young and we want to have fun. We hadn't been listening him and we had go out.
It was really hot,it is even more encouraged us to what we wanted to do. When we get to the pond,nobody was there,so we went into the water.
At the begginning we just stand in coast and we joke in water,but water it was hot,after a short time,we started to swim. I have not swim away,because I know that I can't good swim,but Sarah don't scared and swiming away,but she returned at times,to show me that everything ok.
Suddenly became terribly dark and it started to rain and the storm. I didn't see Sarah,so I started to scream 'Sarah! where are you?!' . I'm quickly go out the water and screamed louder and louder : 'Sarah!! Are u ok?' .
I jumping on a bridge and in the distance I saw her figure. I saw that she no has power.
Suddenly I saw she disappear under the water and tries to emerage. I was scared and I don't know what i had to do,because i can't swimming. I starting to cry with fear and helplessness.
Suddenly I saw light on car,after a while near me stopped the car and ran with him my brother with a friend Chris.
'Where is Sarah?!'-he screaming . I said ' I don't know. In water!' . My brother with Chris fast jump to the water. Rain was falling harder and harder. After a while I heard a scream Chris ' I had Sarah!! I find her!'
Sarah was conscious,but she shaking and coughing.
Fortunately,Lucas is a lifeguard at the pool and he knows,what to do in such cases.
He wrapped her in warm blanked and took as to home.
In home Lucas did a warm cup of tea and put Sarah in to sleep. Sarah was be tired and sleep very fast,she was still in shock.
Boys screaming for me and told my parents about everything. We received a penatly. We don't protest.
I will never forget that,because fortunately,it all ended wall,but I dread to thing what might love happend.