1.I don't like they way she looks at you-->How she looks at you is what I don't like.
2. I have never ever witnessed such a disaster.--->At.... ???
3. After a while they entered the bulding. --->Into the building did they enter after a while.
4. Your actions speak lauder than words. --->It is your actions more noticable than words.
5.Without jack we wouldn't have finally overcome the difficulties. -->Jack is the person thanks to whom we have overcome the difficulties.
6. What she discovered was not so shocking as what she did with the discovery. --->It is what she did did do with the discovery more shocking than what she discovered.
7.Whenever did she strike back? ---> When was it when she stroke back?
8. We had just packed our things when the taxi arrived.---> No sooner had we packed our thinks than the taxi arrived,
9. In my opinion Betty's inteligence is worth admiring. -->I do Betty's inteligence is worth admiring.
10. When did the differences between the 2 copies strike you?---> When was the differences between 2 copies stroke you?
11. His reluctance to confess to the error met with loud disapproval. ---> Barely..?..moved her to tears.
12. She doesn't care too much about her work.---> Little does she care about her work.
13.Mike never talked about his job because he didn'y enjoy it. ---> What Mike never enjoyed doing is talking about his job.
14. I don't need anything else except for your unflagging support.--> All I need is your unflagging support.
15. Even though he is strong, he stands no chance at all. --->However he is strong, he has no chance at all.