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Nowadays students want to be more financially independent for that reason they have credit cards. But there are some advantages and disadvantages relevant possess plastic money.

There is no denying that students became more responsible when they have bank account. They learn how to plan expenses and discovered that they cannot buy everything whatever they want because their financial resources are limited. This skills will be use in their adult live. What is more, if you have charge card you do not have to carry money because you can pay it or pick money out from cashpoint. It is very comfortable. Another thing is that when people have not got money they can run into debt and later pay them off.

On the other hand, credit cards have also disadvantages. First of all, students may get into debt. When they have too big expenses and they do not control them it makes a lot of problems. Secondly, credit card can be lost and money from account may be stolen. It is also true that banks assess different small fees for banking transactions. For students each penny is important so it is additional financial burden for their budget.

In conclusion, there are many pros and cons of possessing credit cards for students. The decision of whether to have account in bank and use plastic money or keep cash in sock remains a matter of personal choice.

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Nowadays students want to be more financially independent AND for that
reason they have credit cards. But there are some advantages and
disadvantages relevant IN possessING plastic money.

There is no denying that students becOme more responsible when they
have A bank account. They learn how to plan expenses and discover that
they cannot buy everything THAT they want because their financial
resources are limited. ThESE (l. mnoga dlatego ze skills to l. mnoga) skills will be useFUL in their adult liveS. What is more, if you have A charge card you do not have to carry money because you can pay BY it or OBTAIN money out OF A CASHMACHINE.
Another thing is that when people have not got ANY money they can run into debt and ONLY later pay THEIR DEBTS OFF.
On the other hand, credit cards ALSO have disadvantages. When they have too LARGE AN expenses and they do not control them THIS CREATES a lot of problems. Secondly, credit cardS can be lost and money from THEIR account may be stolen. For students each penny is important so it is AN additional financial burden
for their budget.
In conclusion, there are many pros and cons of possessing credit cards
BY students. The decision of whether to have A BANK account and use
plastic money or keep cash (mozna tez ...hidden..) in A sock remains a matter of personal choice.

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