Strategy to keep your job

Witam
Muszę napisać na poziomie FCE nie za długi speach na następujący temat. Proszę o słowa krytyki, i kila miłych słów, żebym sie nie załamał.

Speech:
Subject: A good strategy to keep your work

There are many strategy pointers you should follow.

It is important to make yourself noticeable. But I would put the emphasis on what impression you leave co-workers with. So you should care about what other people thing about you. The way you behave shows what kind of character you are. If you came early if your are never late if you don't frown on your responsibilities you could make the positive impression.

You should do your job diligently so that your boss can see it and arrive at a positive conclusion about you and your approach to work.

You should show your best side and show that you care, that you can do a good job and that you can fulfil your responsibilities. You should show that you are hard-working and you can work hard to keep your employer satisfied. Try to broaden your knowledge about your work every time you can it will show that you are interested in the field of your work.

brak wstepu
pointer jako wskazowka? raczej tip
put emphasis
your co-workers
thing?
cAme?
don't nie w wypowiedzi pisemnej
przecinek po responsi...
a positive
and form a positive opinion
show your best qualities
you can. It (This)

przebija przyciężki polski styl oficjalny. (the field of your work itp. - lepiej 'in what you do'). Na C będzie, ale chyba nie wyżej