travelling by bicycle

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1. Write a composition discussing the pros and cons of travelling by bicycle. (120-180 words)

A lot of people throughout the world travel by bicycle. Some of them ride their bicycles only for sport hoping to keep fit whilst others use their bicycles to reach particular places, such as a shop or a place where they work.

The bicycle is a good tool to keep the body fit. It allows you to lose calories, weight and strengthen you muscles. What is more, riding a bicycle is a lot of fun, you can also get pleasure from ridding and sunbathe. However, you must be fit in advance if you want to cover long distances. I suppose that the most strong point for ridding a bicycle is that is economical. – You don't need worry about fuel and it's prices, which usually go up every summer season. On the other hand, one would say that food is fuel and a cyclist is an engine, thus the more you ride the more you have to eat. In a sense, it is true, but you also lessen you fatty tissue(tkankę tłuszczową) while extreme physical effort.

On the negative side, you have to breath car fumes and it is definitely detrimental to you health and lungs. Especially that if you have to move through cars that have stuck in a traffic jam. In such smoggy environment you are tired and sweaty, you need a fresh air, but you receive car fumes instead. If you have to get to your job through such smoggy traffic jams you should reconsider using a bicycle.

To sum up, there are more advantages and the best choice would be an environmentally friendly rout. In the mountains or across a forest where you have a lot of clean air. Ridding a bicycle in streets where cars move would be a terrible choice.

A lot of people throughout the world travel by bicycle. Some of them ride their bicycles only for sport hoping to keep fit (dalabym tutaj przecinek) whilst others use their bicycles to reach particular places, such as a shop or a place where they work.

The bicycle is a good tool to keep the body fit. It allows you to lose calories, weight and strengthen 'you' YOUR muscles. What is more, riding a bicycle is a lot of fun, you can also get pleasure from 'ridding and sunbathe' (cos tu nie tak) .
I suppose that the most strong point for 'ridding' (RIDING) a bicycle is that IT is economical. – You don't need (tu cos brak) worry about fuel and 'it's' (to co napisales to znaczy 'it is', tutaj ma byc ITS)' prices, which usually go up every summer season.
In a sense, it is true, but you also lessen 'you' (jak masz na mysli 'twoja' to jest YOUR) fatty tissue while 'extreme physical effort' (cos tu nie tak).

On the negative side, you have to 'breath' (tutaj napisales rzeczownikm, a ma byc czasownik) car fumes and it is definitely detrimental to youR (co to jest z tym 'your'?) health and lungs. Especially 'that' (niepotr) if you have to move through cars that 'have' ARE stuck in a traffic jam. In such smoggy environment you are tired and sweaty, you need 'a' (niepotr) fresh air, but you receive car fumes instead.

To sum up, there are more advantages and the best choice would be an environmentally friendly 'rout' (co to jest?).
.... In the mountains or across a forest where you have a lot of clean air... to nie jest zdaniem)
'Ridding' RIDING a bicycle in streets where cars move would be a terrible choice.

Dzięki Terry,


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What is more, riding a bicycle is a lot of fun, you can also get pleasure form it and sunbathe - co więcej, jazda na rowerze jest zabawna, możesz też czerpać z niej przyjemność i opalać się.
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Dlaczego?

In a sense, it is true, but you also lessen your fatty tissue while extreme physical effort - W pewnym sensie, to prawda, ale też zmniejszasz swoją tkanę tłuszczową podczas extremalnego wysiłku fizycznego.
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Dlaczego?
Mi się wydaje właśnie że właśnie ma być 'have stuck' - ale 'are' też mogłoby być. (?)
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no tak 'route'
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Riding a bicycle in streets where cars move would be a terrible choice. - czemu zdanie jest złe?
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Faktycznie dużo literówek typu 'you' zamiast 'your' - będę musiał nad tym popracować :)