korki uliczne - przyczyny i rozwiązania

Czy mógłby mi ktoś pomóc napisać speech na temat przyczyn i rozwiązań korków ulicznych?


IMHO:
There are too many cars in the streets, and the quality of roads is poor. - These two factors cause traffic jams and cause cars to move slowly.

This problem can be solved by larger number of road available for cars. However, resignations form cars seems a better idea. The public transport should be modernized and popularized. In time, it would encourage people to punch tickets instead of traveling by their own means of transport - cars. This would by far reduce the traffic in the streets. What is more, the air would be twice as clean as it is now. The Underground is environmentally friendly and releases no fumes.

We could go a bit further. All the traffic in the city could be shifted under ground. After that, a campaign for the Underground should be started to make people aware of the benefits. What is more, the room for greenery would come into existence. The appearance of the city would change as well – from busy roads to peaceful green scenery. The roads would be changed into something nicer to watch. Many parts would come into existence. Parks to take a walk, and running routes for joggers

This would benefit people who live in densely populated cities. These changes will mostly benefit residents of cities and give them the opportunity to take a walk after hard work or go jogging on Sunday morning. Such an investment will cost a lot of money, but the city will be changed enormously and will become more acceptable for human beings.

This problem can be solved by larger number of 'road' (chyba l. mn) available for cars. However, resignations 'form' (zle slowo albo lit) cars seems a better idea.
In time, it would encourage people to (ale najpierw trzeba je kupic) punch tickets instead of traveling by their own means of transport - cars. This would by far reduce the traffic 'in the streets' (jak mowimy o 'cars' to chyba 'roads').
The Underground (nie wiem co to ma do 'cars')is environmentally friendly and releases no fumes.

Many parts (ale czego?) would come into existence.

These changes will mostly benefit residents of cities and give them the opportunity to take a walk after (zrob to inaczej 'a hard day's work) hard work or go jogging on Sunday morning.

Dzięki Terri za uwagę i poprawki
1. Wydaje mi się, że 'cars in the streets' jest ok/poprawne
2.
No jak co ma? Kolej podziemna, jest korzystna dla środowiska, w przeciwieństwie do aut.
3. to take a walk after hard work - iść na spacer się po ciężkiej pracy - dlaczego tak nie może być? Ciężka praca to jest przecież po prostu 'hard work'. 'It is very hard work' - czyli to jest bardzo ciężka praca. .

1. Wydaje mi się, że 'cars in the streets' jest ok/poprawne
ale cars nie jezdza po streets, tylko po roads. - i to mialam na mysli
2. The Underground (nie wiem co to ma do 'cars')is environmentally friendly and releases no fumes.
No jak co ma? Kolej podziemna, jest korzystna dla środowiska, w przeciwieństwie do aut.
Tak, zgadzam sie, tylko, ze to zdanie powinno byc troche pozniej.
3.to take a walk after hard work -
nie, jest 'working hard' - moze popatrz w ksiazkach.