Plis sprawdzi mi ktos list formalny?

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Dear Sir
He is writing this letter in order to around to advertise goods I bought which at you. I am disappointed with the quality of clothes. As well a different colour and a size of the blouse were sent me than I ordered which in your company. The price wasn\'t competitive what he is marking that expensively but in spite of it the wait for the dispatch was too long. I ask for the refund or exchanges for dressing the good quality. He is thanking a lot! XYZ
dlaczego zaczynasz list od 'HE'?- widze, ze znowu jakis dobry translator mial w tym swoja reke.
Napisz to sama - wtedy poprawimy.
a gdzie.. 120 słów.. do poprawy !;)
jak szybko policzyłam, to słów jest 101 :)
dopisz cos do 120, inaczej 1 punkt mniej za formę

pozdrawiam :)
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