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Modern technology switch off our mind.

Modern technology is becoming inherent in our live. And nowadays it is difficult to imagine that you don’t have the Internet, TV or mobile phone. We use computers in business, public services, education and, most of all, in entertainment. Well, everything we do is affected by modern technology with computers above all. But we don’t really often use it for beneficial aims.
Firstly, from the youngest years, we use the Internet and we can very easy become governed by it. Therefore, our rational thinking is switching off. For example by playing for long time computer games or watching films. Then, nothing is important for us. Secondary, on a account of development of technology, we forget to do things such as making exercises. We can bit by bit isolate from society and we can break down relationships with people. Finally, sitting in front of TV set can make reading seen less attractive. It discourages us from talking exercises and stops us going to theatre, cinema, etc.
On the other hand, modern technology carries with itself lots of advantages. It allows us to effective exchange of information and fast communication. Besides, it can be educational and good for old people (watching TV).
That is why in my opinion, computers and other developments of technology are useful and there is no possibility to live without them nowadays, as we got to much used to them. Supposing that we use the Internet cleverly it's undoubtedly the best source of information.

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