Witam. Piszę niedługo maturę rozszerzoną z angielskiego i prosiłbym o sprawdzenie (wytknięcie błędów i sugestie) mojego opowiadania na temat z 2012: "Napisz opowiadanie o zawodach sportowych, w trakcie których osoba z publiczności przypadkowo spowodowała sytuację niebezpieczną dla zawodników."
Bicycle race
The July. The morning sun was waking up to start a new day. Big, bald men with brown eyes named Jerry and his son, little boy with curly, brown hair and father's eyes, about 12 years old named Tommy had to go to see bicycle race. Jerry's brother was riding there.
"Come on! Come on! We are late" said Tommy to his father pulling him to the door. "Ok, I am going" answered dad. A tour was around district. There were barriers everywhere to separate people who just watching from bicyclists. The father and son got closer. "Dad, look! Uncle John is winning!" said Tommy. Rider on white bike was first on finish line but that was just the first lap. Tommy was holding a small ball which he got from uncle John. He dropped it. Little boy started to looking for it and saw the ball on the middle of the road. He went under the barrier and when he had took up ball he heard a ring. This was coming rider. Lucky, bicyclist had turned left before he could hit the kid. He fell but he was fine. Tommy fast ran back. His father blamed him that he made dangerous situation for himself and the cyclists.
The race had to be restarted and Tommy promised he won't do it again.
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I wiem, że historia jest denna, ale nic lepszego mi sie nie udało wymyślić :)
edytowany przez lays141: 02 maj 2014