poprawka angielski

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Nie zdalam matury roszerzonej z ang. i teraz mam poprawke w sierpniu. Musze sie na nia sama przygotowac i dlatego mam prosbe czy ktos moglby sprawdzic bledy w tym wypracowaniu, jest mi to bardzo potrzebne wiem ze mam problemy z uzywaniem odpowiednio czasow ale moze z czyms jeszcze. Prosze o odp.

Rozprawka na temat plusów i minusów wprowadzenia opłat za opiekę medyczną.

The level of medical care in Poland is thought to be highly unsatisfactory and, therefore, there has been a suggesstion to introduce fees to cover the
costs of some medical treatment. What would be the benefist and drawbacks of such legislation?
There certainly are some advantages. Firstly people will be under a proffesional doctor's care, moreover they will have doctor to their disposition.
Secondly people wouldn't have to stay for a long hours in queues to see doctor. On the other hand medical staff will have better solaries, and
I think they will be work harder. Also pople will have better conditions.
Contrary to this argumentation, there are some negative effects of this situation. Most of people, especially aged haven't got much money to buy
paintkillers, and just now to pay for medical care. It's unfair for the poor and underprivileged people. Forthemore money wouldn't be used properly. Bribe
will be used more often than before to do some matters quicklier.
To sum up, although there are some advantages and disadvantages of introducing fees for medical care. I think that everybody should have proffesional
medical care, especially elderly and poor people. So I believe that this situation will be soon solution.

Z gory dziekuje za odpowidz.
The level of medical care in Poland is thought to be highly unsatisfactory and, therefore, there has been a 'suggesstion' (ortog) to introduce fees to cover the costs of some medical treatment.(mysle, ze tu lepiej 'treatments') What would be the 'benefist' (ortof) and drawbacks of such A legislation?
Firstly people will be under a 'proffesional'(ortog) doctor's care, moreover they will have A doctor 'to' AT their 'disposition' (nie, lepiej DISPOSAL).
Secondly people wouldn't have to 'stay' (nie, tutaj lepiej STAND albo nawet WAIT) for 'a' (niepotr przed l. mn 'hours') long hours in queues (in order) to
see THE doctor. On the other hand medical staff will have better 'solaries' (ortog), and I think they will be work harder. Also 'pople' (ortog) will have better 'conditions' (nie rozumiem co masz na mysli piszac 'conditions').
Contrary to this 'argumentation' ARGUMENT, there are some negative effects of
this situation. Most 'of' (niepotr) people, especially THE aged 'haven't got' (ja wole DO NOT HAVE) much money to buy 'paintkillers' (ortog), and 'just now' (nie rozumiem uzycia tego tutaj) to pay for medical care. It's unfair for
the poor and 'underprivileged' (ortog) people. 'Forthemore' (ortog) THE money wouldn't be used properly. BribeS will be used more often than before 'to do' (nie, cos innego tutaj) some matters 'quicklier' (to slowo nie istnieje w jez. ang - tutaj QUICKER).
To sum up, although there are some advantages and disadvantages of
introducing fees for medical care. (Nie mozesz konczyc zdania po ...medical care...bo to nie jest pelne zdanie) I think that everybody should have
'proffesional' (ortog) medical care, especially THE elderly and THE poor people. So I believe that this situation will be soon 'solution' (solution to rzeczownik, a tutaj potrzeba czasownika - RESOLVED).
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