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These days, more and more people are thinking of having plastic surgery to improve their appearance. Some people believe that plastic surgery is a good idea and should to use it, but others think it can dangerous and harmful to health.
Without a doubt, there are some advantages to having plastic surgery.
Firstly, if someone has a scar from an accident, can remove it with the help of a doctor. This will improve the confidence of a person.
Secondly, plastic surgery can help the people live a normal life without felling different who born with a birth defect.
However, there are a number of disadvantages to plastic surgery for purely cosmetic reasons.
In the first place, there might be a chance that something will go wrong. People can worsen health. Finally, plastic surgery can be addictive and can become an obsession.
All in all, there are both advantages and disadvantages to people having plastic surgery. I think that people should ask themselves before they go under the knife.

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