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My frend names Andzelika. She is twenty years old. First time I met her on the playground.
She is tall and slim. Her face is oval. Has got small, bright blue eyes, and curly hair. She usually wear jeans.
My best friend knows everything about me. He knows how I feel when he see me. He knows about my weaknesses and problems. He understands my needs and listens to my dreams. He listens to how I feel about life and love and knows what it all means. Many times he told me I was wrong. He understood what I was going through and promised he'd stay forever. He should be very reliable person and he should be always there to support me. He shouldn't leave me alone with a problem but he should help me to overcome. If I am not happy he ought to make me laugh.
In leisure time ske likes exploring new places shop, museums and restaurants In summer do some gardening,. She is very inyo cooking so she likes going around market and food stores. Later she makes a delicious meal in the evening

Witaj Andżeliko!
Na mój gust fajna charakterystyka przyjaciela-przyjaciółki chociaż uczę sie angielskiego dopiero od 28.08.2006. Jednak podstawowym błedem jaki widzę jest zagmatwanie w tym Twoim przeskakiwaniu z przyjaciółki na przyjaciela i odwrotnie bo po zdaniu: If I am not happy he ought to make me laugh. piszesz: In leisure time ske(tu chyba miało być "she") likes exploring new places shop, museums and restaurants. I potem caly czas piszesz o niej a nie o nim i to takie pokręcone jest troszkę. Potem jest zdanko: She is very inyo(co to? czy nie miało być enjoy?) cooking so she likes going(a tu: is going) around market and food stores. Po za tym to zdanie, o którym pisałem Ci na początku czyli: If I am not happy he ought to make me laugh. to nie bardzo jest poprawne bo rozumię, ze ought to miało być tought czyli myślał więc tłumacząc masz w zdaniu 2 czasy I am i he tought i to jest takie nie bardzo z sensem więc zdecyduj się na jeden czas. Nie wiem czy jeszcze są jakieś błędy w Twoim wypracowaniu bo jestem za świeży w tym języku, ale te o których Ci napisałem możesz już skorygować.
No to narka. Piotrek

My friend name's Andzelika. She is twenty years old. First time I met her on the playground.
She is tall and slim. Her face is oval.She has got small, bright blue eyes, and curly hair. She usually wear jeans.
My best friend knows everything about me. She knows how I feel when she see me. She knows about my weaknesses and problems. She understands my needs and listens about my dreams. She listens to how I feel about life and love and knows what it all means. Many times she told me when I was wrong. she understanded what I was going through and promised she will stay forever with me. She should be very reliable person and she should be always there to support me. She shouldn't leave me alone with a problem but she should help me to overcome. If I am not happy she should to make me laugh.
In leisure time she likes exploring new places shop, museums and restaurants In summer do some gardening,. She is very enjoy cooking so she likes going around market and food stores. Later she makes a delicious meal in the evening

Więc tak... Dużo błędów tu nie było. Poprawiłam niektóre wyrazy, które moim zdaniem lepiej brzmią... Nie jestem jednak pewna czy zauważyłam wszystkie błędy, jeśli ktoś widzi coś więcej prosze również poprawić mnie :D

A i oczywiście powinno być 'she really enjoy... nie very...