bardzo prosze o pomoc i sprawdzenie...

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witam, czy znalazł by sie ktoś kto mógłby sprawdzić to co napisałam w języku ang?? nigdy nie bylam z tego zbyt dobra... Bardzo serdecznie prosze o pomoc:)
Every professionals sportsmans especially champions like a Michael Schumacher or marion Jonesare are multi-millionnaires. They earn not only for victory or taking part in competitions, tournaments, chempionships. Presently, competitior who's in top formand prewail can make one's debiut in advertisment or TV show. What is more he can gain sponsorship with some company.
When we talk about sportwe should say about negative side this profession. Nowdays tahe world of sport faces several problems.
Firstly persons who want to go to sports events must pay more than it was a few years ago. Just thinking! We paying millions of dolars for competitiors but on the other side we live beside poor people which don't have a roof over their heads. Somethings gone wrong.
Secondly, we can observe like sports clubs buing a sportsmans for milions $. Sometimes some influential persons inpinge on score. Corruption is attend in sport, and is bad way for them.
napisalam tylko tyle i nie wiem czy jest sens pisac dalej poniewaz nie wiem jak to wyglada, tzn. czy jest duzo bledow, bede bardzo wdzieczna za pomoc
edytowany przez anett2589: 09 gru 2010

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