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Big Ben
First of the major sights of London is Big Ben. This is The Clock Tower, which is the part of
Palace of Wetminster. Citizens of England hear beats of clock every hour, every day in BBC radio.Name „Big Ben” comes from sir Benjamin Hall , who did 13-ton bell, which is in the middle of the tower. This Clock Tower show the time under 150 years.

London Eye
Second famous symbol of the capital of England is The London Eye, also known as the Millenium Wheel. This monument is situated on the south bank of Tamiza river, and it was building to celebrate new millenium . Wheel has 32 capsules, which take up to 25 people. Per ticket people must pay from 8 to 17 £. London eye full rotation takes 40 minutes

Tower of London
Tower of London is the one of the most beautiful palaces in Great Britain. In their history, Tower of London was also a fortress and prison. In the past kings of England lived there. Building is guarded by security guards, called Yeoman Warders, who live in the palace with their families. According to legend, if the birds leave the fortress, London will die.

Tower Bridge

Next famous monument in London is The Tower Bridge. This bridge is carried by the river Tamiza near the Tower of London. Characteristic elements of this structure are the two towers at the beginning and end of the bridge


Palace Buckingham
And the last very important monument in London is The Buckingham Palace- the official residence of British monarchs.

This is The Clock Tower, which is the part of (brak przedimka) Palace of 'Wetminster.' (ortog) Citizens of England hear (brak przedimka) beats of (brak przedimka) clock every hour, every day 'in' ON BBC radio. (brak przedimka) name „Big Ben” comes from 'sir' (duza litera, to jest tytul) Benjamin Hall , who 'did' (daj inne slowo, wiecej trafne) (brak przedimka) 13-ton bell, which is in the middle of the tower. This Clock Tower 'show' (tutaj 3os.l.poj) the time 'under' (dziwne slowo, popraw) 150 years.

London Eye
(brak przedimka) second famous symbol of the capital of England is The London Eye, also known as the Millenium Wheel. This monument is situated on the south bank of 'Tamiza' (a to po jakiemu, napisz to po ang.) 'river' (duza litera), and it was 'building' (zla czesc mowy-tutaj daj czasownik) to celebrate (brak przedimka) New Millenium (duze litery, nazwa wlasna) . (brak przedimka) wheel has 32 capsules, which take up to 25 people. 'Per ticket people must pay from 8 to 17 £' (zrob to zdanie inaczej...People must pay from X to X per ticket). (brak przedimka) (The full rotation)(brak 2 slowa) London Eye (duza litera) 'full rotation' (niepotr) takes 40 minutes

Tower of London
Tower of London is 'the' (niepotr) one of the most beautiful palaces in Great Britain. In 'their' (nie, daj tutaj 'its' history, (brak przedimka) Tower of London was also a fortress and (brak przedimka) prison. In the past (brak przedimka) kings of England lived there. (brak przedimka) building is guarded by security guards, called Yeoman Warders, who live in the palace with their families. According to (brak przedimka) legend, if the birds leave the fortress, London will die. (ale musisz napisac cos o tych 'birds' nbo tak z nikad to wkladasz do zdania)

Tower Bridge
This bridge is carried by the 'river Tamiza' (popraw to i nie mieszaj i duza litery) near the Tower of London.

'Palace Buckingham' (napisz to po ang bo tak na to nie mowimy)
'And' (nie zaczynaj zdan z 'and') The last very important monument in London is 'The' (niepotr) Buckingham Palace- the official residence of British monarchs.