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Dear Sir
I am writing to complain about computer. I bought in your shop in Warszawa on yesterday. Computer running loud. The computer sound is not working and the picture is indistinct. My friend who is known on computers. He try repair computers, he try to format it, but computer all time do not work. I want to express my dissatisfaction with this product. I would be ask about somebody sending from computer service. Repairs should be free. Your computer is under warranty. I hope you will replace do not work parts. I would appreciate a quick reply.
Yours faithfully
XYZ

Daleko mi do takich ekspertów jak terri czy mg, ale z moimi poprawkami brzmi chyba lepiej. Może jeszcze wpadną tu dzisiaj i ewentualnie poprawią.

I am writing to complain about the computer (bez kropki) I bought in your shop in Warszawa on yesterday. The computer running works loudly. The computer sound and graphic cards do not working properly. My friend who is known on computers a computer technician tried to repair the computer, he try to format it, but computer all time it still does not work. I want to express my dissatisfaction with this product. I would be ask about like you to send somebody sending from the computer service. The repair should be free because the computer is under warranty. I hope you will replace do not work damaged parts with working ones. I would appreciate a quick reply.
Yours faithfully

The computer running works loudly.
The computer is very loud.

Chociaz generalnie ja bym nie przyznawala sie ze ktos chcial to reperowac, bo wtedy gwarancja nie jest wazna, ale mozna napisac, ze ...technician with years of experience could not determine what the fault might be without actully taking the computer to bits.

Dziękuję bardzo za pomoc. Musiałam napisać, że ktoś pomagał bo w zadaniu tak bylo.