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Dear Dalia!
How are you? I’ve found your address in “Eng4You” magazine in pen-friends rubric. I love Spain, so I decided write to you.
I’m Mathew and I live in Poland. I’m 18, I go to a grammar school. I’m quite tall and slim, I’ve a brown eyes, same as hair. I’m interested in sport and music. What I like to do the most is active time spending. I love to play basketball or handball with friends, we meet every weekend. My future plans aren’t connected with sport, I think about working in USA.
Maybe something about music – I like very many kinds of music, what I listening to depends on my mood. I can listen to music very loud in my house, because I don’t have any siblings. Also my parents are often absent, father works in a factory and mother works in a school so afternoons I’ve the house for my own.
Looking forward to hearing from you, I hope you write soon a letter about you!
Best wishes, XYZ

Proszę o sprawdzenie, z góry dziękuję ;)

Dear Dalia!
How are you? I’ve found your address in “Eng4You” magazine in a pen-friends rubric. I love Spain, so I decided write to you.
I’m Mathew and I live in Poland. I’m 18, I go to a grammar school. I’m quite tall and slim, I’ve brown eyes, same as hair. I’m interested in a sport and a music. What I like to do the most is an active time spending. I love to play a basketball or a handball with friends, we meet every weekend. My future plans aren’t connected with a sport, I think about working in the USA.
Maybe something about a music – I like very many kinds of music, what I listening to depends on my mood. I can listen to music very loud in my house, because I don’t have any siblings. Also my parents are often absent, father works in a factory and mother works in a school so afternoons I’ve the house for my own.
Looking forward to hearing from you, I hope you write soon a letter about you!
Best wishes, XYZ

mam kłopoty z przedimkami, próbowałem poprawić, ale nie wiem czy dobrze

I love Spain, so I decided (tu cos brakuje) write to you.
I’m interested in a sport (ale jaki?) and 'a' (nie rozumiem uzycia tergo 'a' tutaj) music. What I like to do the most 'is an active time spending.' (zla kol slow - pomysl co piszesz) I love to play 'a' (co to sie stalo z tym 'a'? tutaj niepotr) basketball or 'a' (niepotr) handball with friends, we meet every weekend. My future plans aren’t connected with 'a' (zakochales sie w tym 'a' czy cos?) sport, I think about working in the USA.
Maybe something about 'a' (niepotr) music – I like very many kinds of music, what I 'listening' (zly czas) to depends on my mood. I can listen to 'music very loud' (zla kol slow) in my house, because I don’t have any siblings. Also my parents are often absent, (tu brakuje slowa) father works in a factory and (tu brakuje slowa) mother works in a school so afternoons I’ve the house 'for my own' (nie, tutaj mowimy 'to myself').

I love Spain, so I decided to write to you.
I’m interested in sports and music. What I like to do the most 'is spending time active'. I love to play basketball or handball with friends, we meet every weekend. My future plans aren’t connected with sport, I think about working in the USA.
Maybe something about music – I like very many kinds of music, what I listen to depends on my mood. I can listen very loud to music in my house, because I don’t have any siblings. Also my parents are often absent, my father works in a factory and my mother works in a school so afternoons I’ve the house to myself.

Teraz lepiej?

Czyli pierwotna wersja z mniejszą ilością a była o niebo lepsza :P Muszę nad tym popracować, dzięki kolejny raz za sprawdzenie terri.

What I like to do the most is 'spending time active' (nie,...to spend my time being active)'.
I can listen TO very loud to music in my house, because I don’t have any siblings. Also my parents are often absent, my father works in a factory and my mother works in a school so IN THE afternoons I’ve the house to myself.

Polub te przedimki, zakochaj sie w nich - niech one sie wchlona w twoje cialo...wtedy bedzie lepiej..;-)

I can listen TO very loud 'to' (niepotr) music in my house