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Hey John,
Thanks for your letter! It’s really nice to hear from you. I’m sorry I haven’t written to you for ages but I didn’t know your new address because you didn’t tell me that you moved out.
You asked me what I’ve been doing. Mhmm.. Nothing special. Mostly time in a day I’m sitting in school and after school I surf the Internet in home. On weekends I’m playing football on the sports hall with my friends.

But I must tell you that I have already had my own driving licence. I’m so happy. I’m going to visit now a lot of polish cities for an example Kraków, Gdańsk, Wrocław. Maybe I’ll visit my grandparents in France. Who knows, maybe I’ll visit You ;)

I must go now. My mum’s calling me for dinner. Please tell me something new about you. Greetings to all your family.

Best wishes

Damian

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Hey John,
Thanks for your letter! It’s really nice to hear from you. I’m sorry I haven’t written to you for ages but I didn’t know your new address because you didn’t tell me that you moved out PAST CONTINUOUS ALBO 'WERE GOING TO MOVE OUT'.
You asked me what I’ve been doing. Mhmm.. Nothing special. Mostly time <-NIEZROZUMIALE, PEWNIE MOST OF THE TIME I’m sitting in school and after school I surf the Internet in home. >polish cities for example Kraków, Gdańsk, Wrocław. Maybe I’ll visit my grandparents in France. Who knows, maybe I’ll visit You ;)

I must go now. My mum’s calling me for dinner. Please tell me something new about you. Greetings to all your family.

Best wishes

Damian
dziekuje ;)

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