Napisz opowiadanie o nastolatku, który w czasie wycieczki szkolnej ratuje kolegów będących w niebezpieczeństwie.
It was a sunny November day when Steven was riding to the New York by bus with his classmates and tutor. They hoped that they would see the most interesting monuments of “Big Apple”.
The driver decided to take a break because they were riding three hours. They stopped in Miami to buy something to eat and drink but also to take a photo that beautiful place. A few students went to the forbidden place where they might be imperilled.
Suddenly, someone had started loudly screaming, Steven hearing it decided to run there to see what happened. Mac and Tom sited on the tree because under them were three crocodiles.
That predators were really big and aggressive. They had also sharp teeth and were really greedy. Mac and Tom were terrified and they even started crying. Steven was so brave that he was going to help his friends. He well knew that crocodiles are afraid of fire and noise. He bought lighter and fireworks which could scared them at a shop. Steven had lighted fireworks and threw among crocodiles. Sparks and noise had scared reptiles and they got away to the forest. Tom and Mac had left the tree and went to the bus.
Steven had become a hero and received prize for saving his friends. Mac and Tom understood that they should have listened to their teacher.
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