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Cytat:
My room is rather big. Walls are green, but the window and the door are white. I share room with my brother, so there are two bed. There are wardrobes, desk, bookcases and green soft carpet. On the desk is computer. There is usually a mess there, because I don’t like tidy. In the wall are two posters. First of the heroes of the movie Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince and second with heroes of the movie Avatar. In my room a few plants, but cares for only one which I bought.
Secend room is small. Walls are yellow colour. There are bed, wardrobes and lamp. Also there are coffee tables and TV. There are few plants. On the floor is brown capret.
musisz dodac przedimki,
poza tym piszesz takie rzeczy jak 'dwa łóżko'
Dziękuje. :)
jak poprawisz, wrzuc tu znowu, bo sa jeszcze inne bledy.