Prośba sprawdzenia krótkiego listu, powtórka przed maturą ;)

Witam. Prosiłbym o sprawdzenie listu :

Wraz z kolegami przygotowaliście przesdstawienie które zostało pokazane podczas imprezy szkolnej. Napisz list do kolegi z Anglii :

1. Jakie przedstawienie wystawiliście i z jakiej okazji
2. Jak długo trwały przygotowania i jaka była Twoja rola.
3. Opisz problem jaki mieliście i jak go rozwiązaliście
4. Wspomnij jaka była reakcja widzów i na co przeznaczyliście pieniądze z biletów.

Oto praca :

Hi Mark !
How are you ? I hope you are well.
You never guess what I did with my friends. 3 weeks ago in our country we had a Christmas so we had decided to prepare a Christmas Performance in our school. Because it was in our school, we want to do something special and perfect for our friends and teachers. We were preparing this event for 2 weeks. My duties was decorations and songs. When we thought that everything was ready, our a CD-player broke down and we had a serious problem ! Fortunately I have a friend who is the best in electrical problem and he helped for us. The performance turned out a fantastic idea. Audience was very happy. We sold 100 tickets. For earned money we bought new books for school library.
So, it was everything what I wanted to write you. Please answer as fast as you can.

Best wishes,
XYZ

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