Prośba o sprawdzenie listu formalnego

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Witam,
muszę napisać list formalny do firmy X o pozwolenie na użycie w mojej pracy magisterskiej nazwy firmy. Więc proszę o pomoc przy tłumaczeniu !

Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is Anna Ogórek , I am studding sociology in Warsaw University. I am writing to ask for youre premistion to youse Your company name x in my master's thesis. If you agreed to my recuest. My master's thesis topic wolud be: "Production on example of X company". I choose Your commpany because excellent example of co-operation whit active consumer. I am especially interested in production in web and peer production P&G because it is inovatory.

I would be very grateful if you could provide me with the answers for my abovementioned question. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Anna Ogórek