Prosze o sprawdzenie, opis wakacji.

Witam!
Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie opisu wakacji.

I have spent my best holidays by the red sea in Egypt. I went ther with my friends and we went there in July, 2008, by air.
Often we spent all days on the beach to take sunbath, swam on sea and admired colorful reef. The best off ever was diving. I was relly afraid but that was unforgetable experience.
Also we visited the most exciting place of this country. I saw pyramid-there was amazing! We visited Kair and The Museum of Egyptian Antiquities. We tasted egyptian food and came to know the culture this people.
It was wery wonderfull time. I never forget this summer.

Z góry bardzo dziękuje za pomoc!:)

I 'have' (niepotr) spent my best holidays by the 'red sea' (a nie wierzysz, ze nazwy wlasne piszemy duzym literami) in Egypt. I went 'ther' (ortog) with my friends and we went there (daj tutaj to 'by air') in July 2008., 'by air' (niepotr).
Often we spent all days on the beach 'to take sunbath' (nie, cos tu nie tak, mala ptaszki maja sunbath) , swam 'on' (nie, bo nie plywasz 'na' morzu tylko 'w' morzu IN THE) sea and admired (brak przedimka) colorful reef. The best 'off' (po co to slowo tutaj jest?) ever was diving. I was 'relly' (ortog) afraid but that was (brak przedimka) unforgetable experience.
I saw (brak przedimka) 'pyramid' (ja bym dala l. mn, bo chyba jest wiecej jak jedna no i duza litera)-'there' THAT was amazing! We visited 'Kair' (to nie jest po ang) and The Museum of Egyptian Antiquities. We tasted Rgyptian food and came to know the culture (brak cos) 'this' (this odnosi sie do l. poj, a 'people' to wiecej jak jeden) people.
It was (brak przedimka) 'wery' (ortog) 'wonderfull' (ortog) time. I WILL never forget this summer.

Z góry bardzo dziękuje za pomoc!:)[/quote]