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For about five years I have interested in computers. My IT adventure began in the secondary-school in third class on IT lesson. Our teacher taught us how to build a web page. Of course all made by us pages was simple and ugly, because no one have a graphic talent. We were amateurs, so we built all code on tables, what now is unthinkable, but we were very excited.
Now I finished high-school. I had many subject about IT. There was: Graphic and multimedia, Operating systems, Programming, Computer devices and few other.
In the future I would do something linking with computers. I'm interesting all kinds of IT: from programming, to 3D graphic.
Some people told me that I was freak. But I think it good do that what you love.

For about five years I have (tu cos brakuje) interested in computers. My IT adventure began in the secondary-school in third 'class' (nie, napisz 'year') 'on' (nie tlumacz to tak prosto z polskiego, to nie wychodzi, tutaj DURING) (brak przedimka) IT lesson.
Of course all 'made by us pages' (tu masz zle, to sie nie trzyma ang gramatyki...all pages made by us) 'was' (ale przeciez 'pages to l. mnoga, popraw) simple and 'ugly' (zle slowo, to wiecej o ludziach, tutaj inne), because no one 'have' (zly czas, tutaj przeszly) a graphic talent. We were amateurs, so we built all (tutaj cos brakuje) code (tutaj cos brakuje) on tables, 'what' (to jest kalka z polskiego 'co' ale w ang tutaj WHICH) now is unthinkable, but we were very excited.
'I had many subject about IT' (tego zdania nie rozumiem) There was: Graphic and multimedia, Operating systems, Programming, Computer devices and 'few other' (np: Polski, Angielski....napisz wyraznie).
In the future I would (tutaj brakuje slowa 'lubic') TO do something linking with computers. I'm 'interesting' (to nie jest czasownik, a ty mowisz, ze ty 'jestes zainteresowany', popraw) all kinds of IT: from 'programming' (generalnie w IT to program, programing...), to 3D graphic.
Some people told me that I was (brak przedimka) freak. But I think it IS good do that what you love.

aha, niekiedy mowimy oo IT specialists jako 'nerds' albo 'geeks'