Witam :) Chciałbym prosić o sprawdzenie mojej pracy pod względem błędów, które pewnie w niej występują :)
Z góry dziękuje, za pomoc.
In the future I would like to be a doctor. There are many advantages and disadvantages in doing this kind of job.
One of the best thing being a doctor is that you can earn lot of money because it is one of the world`s most profitable professions. Furthemore doctor can help other people and learn secrets of human bodies because he must be getting better and better. Moreover it`s a very sociable job as you meet many new people.
Howeover there are disadvantages in becoming a doctor. Firstly it is a tiring job. Also it takes a lot of physical strength. In addition to this you need to be qualified for this job because this is a very responsible job. Moreover, to become a doctor you have to learn a lot.
Neverthless, I believe that the profession of doctor is a very future-oriented profession because I`m going to do it in the future.
Pozdrawiam i liczę na pomoc :)