List nieformalny, krótka wiadomość

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Dear Alex,
Thanks a lot of your letter. I'm sorry I haven't written to you for a long time. I've been ill.
I'm really excited that you're coming to Poland. Now, the weather isn't good, so you should bring warm clothes. Don't forget a digital camera, we’ll take a lot of photos.
When you arrive to Poland I'm going to organize a welcome party for you. Tell me, what date suits you ? (jaki termin Ci odpowiada) I think that, the nearby pub is a good place to make a disco. What do you think ? There is plenty of room to dance, a fantastic music and an original decoration.
I’d forgotten! (Byłbym zapomniał) During my recently visit, I left my CDs. Could you bring it ? I'll be very grateful.
I promise I'll collect you from the airport. Don't worry you can count on me.
I'm really can't wait to see you.
Take care,
Xyz

wiadomość:
Hi Tom,
Thank you for invitation. I really apologise, but I can't come to you. When I was on a school trip I lost my documents. Unfortunately I have to wait for it about 2 weeks. Could I visit you next month ?
Greetings,
Xyz
Bardzo proszę o pilne sprawdzenie
bez przecinka po that
music jest niepoliczalne
fancy decor - bez przedimka, a poza tym original znaczy oryginalna = nieskopiowana
I would have forgotten
recently to przyslowek, a tu jest potrzebny przymiotnik. poza tym to brzmi jak z artykulu prasowego. napisz 'when I last was at your place...'
gdzie zostawiles cd?
CDs liczba mnoga it liczba pojedyncza
po worry kropka
jestem naprawde nie moge?

your/the invitation
I am really sorry
kiedy byles na tej wycieczce (recently albo last week itp.)
it - napisz 'nowy zestaw' a new set
Dziękuje bardzo.

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