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The Internet is a magnificent and amazing addition in our lives. I think using internet has more advantages then disadvantages. First of all, Internet delivers access to a lot of usable information. Using search tools, such as Google or Yahoo, we can find almost everything we need. Thanks to the Internet we can find almost all information useful in our job or school.
We can also do shopping using Internet. We have many online shoop like Ebay and allegro, where we can buy and sell us staff. You can pay with your credit card, or transfer money from your bank account or post office.. Nowadays almost every bigger bank offers transferring money with Internet. It is more faster then going to the bank and filling blankets. .Next advantage of internet is email. It is now possible to send a message to any part of the world through a simple email address and the message is delivered in a matter of seconds. Of course we can send not only texts. We can email whatever we want, movies, photos, songs, computer programs etc.
We can do a lot of things with the internet; we can book holidays, chat with ours friends in Facebook or GG, watch videos and movies , earn money, and many more .
Beside a lot of advantages, Internet has some disadvantages too. First of disadvantages is Internet addiction . People spanding too much time in an online world and and loseing contact with the real life. If you using the Internet, your personal information such as your name, address, etc. can be accessed by other people. If you use a credit card to shop online, then your credit card information can also be stolen. Another problem with Internet is pornogarphy. . There are thousands of pornographic sites on the Internet that can be easily found and can be a detriment to letting children use the Internet.
To sum up, the Internet changed our life in a positive way and made our life more convenient than before

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We can also do shopping using [bp] Internet. We have many online shoop [zs] like Ebay and allegro, where we can buy and sell us staff [zs]. You can pay with your credit card, or transfer money from your bank account or post office. Nowadays, almost every bigger bank offers transferring money with Internet money transfers. It is more faster then [zs] going to the bank and filling blankets [?? tego wcale nie rozumiem] Next [zs] advantage of [bp]internet is email. It is now possible to send a message to any part of the world through [using] a simple email address and [have] the message is delivered in a matter of seconds. [Of course, we can send not only texts. We can email whatever we want, movies, photos, songs, computer programs etc.....popracuj dalej nad tym]

Hope you told your boy to watch out for those chesty gold diggers out there :)

@sav
"chesty kewpie dolls" cracked me up.
I don't want to encourage the lad.
:)

btw, proponuje

Our plane could have crashed.
Why limit one's answer to can/may/will ??
I suppose "may" could be used if I was watching my family's private jet disappear off the radar screen over the Bermuda Triangle.

Oh please don't. You may still want to have some peace, hehe