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The kindnesses or the curse? People always think that the fame is a godsend. The money, career and eclat cause that we desire to be a star. However, we have a choice and we can choose our own way. Unfortunately are the people who haven't this posibility. There are the children of the most known stars. We often call them as borned with a silver spoon in one mouth. Hovewer ,we must remember that they haven't always a bed of roses.

First of all, the notability of their parents ensure them the good opportunities. They have a lot of money and they can visit the most beautiful places. They can also meet the characters from the world of film and music. Surely, they have an assured job in the showbusiness.


Believe it or not, being a famous child have also the disadvantages. This world haven't known the name of intimacy. To illustrate this point, people can't go shopping without the paparazzis. They always accompany them in their privacy life.

In spite of luxury life, the star's children also have the problems with their spirit. A classic example of this is that they are compelled to read other unreal facts about their parents. It is the exyta stress for them.

The truth of the matter is that children of the stars have a longed-for life,but sometimes it is the curse for them. The fame doesn't give back the privacy which they lost with the day of their birthday.

'The' A 'kindnesses' (dlaczego masz to w l. mn?) or the curse?
People always think that 'the' (niepotr) fame is a godsend. The money, career and 'eclat' (nie za bardzo trafne slowo, lepiej 'prestige') cause that we desire to be a star.
Unfortunately 'are the people who haven't' (zrob to inaczej...there are people who do not have) this posibility. 'There' THESE are the children of the most WELL-known stars. We often call them as HAVING BEEN 'borned' (gdzie ty to slowo znalazles? to slowo nie istnieje, tutaj BORN) with a silver spoon in 'one' THE mouth. Hovewer ,we must remember that they haven't (haj juz musisz skracac to 'do not have' to chociaz rob to jak powinno byc) always GOT a bed of roses.

First of all, the notability of their parents ensure them 'the' (po co to 'the' tutaj?) good opportunities.
'Surely, they have an assured job in the showbusiness' (zrob to zdanie inaczej, nie uzywaj 'surely', i 'showbusiness to l. poj).

Believe it or not, being a famous child 'have' (dlaczego 'have'?) 'also' (zrob to inaczej ..also h...) 'the' (niepotr) disadvantages.
This world 'haven't' (widze, ze zakochales sie w tym slowie 'havenb't, i pchasz go wszedzie, tutaj akurat to jest zle, napisz to poprawnie) known the name of intimacy.
They always accompany them in their 'privacy' (zla czesc mowy, jakie life? privacy?) life.

In spite of (cos brak) luxury life, the star's children also have the problems with their 'spirit' ( a ja juz myslalam o alkoholu...).
It is 'the' (zle slowo) 'exyta' (ortog) stress for them.

The truth of the matter is that children of the stars have a longed-for life,but sometimes it is 'the' A curse for them.

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