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Dear Anna,

You know now I'm on holiday! I can't believe that I'm in Rio de Janeiro!
The city is fantasic. I'm staying with the Serpas- they are friends of my family.
They live in a lovely house with a beautiful view of the sea. The beach is just next to
my house, so I can go there every day. I love sunbathing. There is a large swimming
pool near the house.
The weather is hot and sunny.I still can't believe that the weather is so great in here.
The Sun shines all the time.
Yesterday I visited Sugarloaf Mountain. It is a big mountain.
The view was so lovely that I didn't feel tired. O walked around Botanical Gardens,
and visited city with serpas too.
Now I tell you something about people in here. They are really very friendly and happy.
They love having fun. Brazilians are quite attractive. They usually have got brown eyes and
dark hair.
The Brazilians cuisine is delicious, Brazilians love spicy food. They have great seafood and coffee!
Tomorrow I'm driving to Petropolis to enjoy mountain air, I want to visit Cathedral
and Museum of the Empire.
Unfortunatenly, I'm leaving Rio de Janeiro next week. I will call you!
You should see this city.
Rio is a colourful city, you must come here!
Well that is all for now, goodbye and see you soon.


Yours best friend,
X.X
Czy ktoś mógłby mi to sprawdzic i poprawić ewentualne błędy.Z góry dziekuję
"You know now I'm on A holiday" - zmień, jak 'you know' to na końcu zdania, ale mi to bardziej pasuje do języka mówionego,
"Now I tell you something about people in here" - czas nie taki, 'tell' nie pasuje do listu
"They usually have got brown eyes" użyłabym 'often'
"The Brazilians cuisine" ...Brazilians'...
" I want to visit THE Cathedral
I still can't believe that the weather is so great in here.
The Sun (nie pisze SUN z duza litera) shines all the time.
O[??] walked around [brak przedimka]Botanical Gardens,
and ALSO visited [brak przedimka] city with [brak przedimka] serpas too.
Tomorrow I'm driving to Petropolis to enjoy [bp]mountain air, I want to visit [bp]Cathedral
and Museum of the Empire.
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Thanks for the skinny on your trip by the way. Sorry about Santa Fe. I don't get it why.
It's good you got there savvy ex-New Yorker tow guy, God bless him. Thanks for pics, awesome
landscape in the background.
Don't know what happened with my keyboard..
edytowany przez savagerhino: 31 mar 2012
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edytowany przez fui_eu: 31 mar 2012
tak, tam mailo byc 'to' :)
'with' tu nie pasuje
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