list z wakacji

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Temat pracy: List prywatny z podziękowaniem.
Właśnie wróciłeś z wakacji. Napisz list w którym:
-podziękujesz znajomemu za spędzenie wspólnie wakacji
-napiszesz o tym co warto było zobaczyć/zwiedzić i co wywarło na tobie wrażenie
-podasz informacje o tym co teraz robisz jak również co zamierzasz robić w weekend
-zaproś swojego znajomego na kilka dni/weekend

Dear Ado!
I am writing to thank you so much of spending time for you. It was a pleasure to meet you.
I was very pleased to sunbathe for beach as well from collecting shells. I'll never forget high wave and of doing sand castles. It was visiting castle of Malbork, because I love old buildings. Monuments are impressive. I was very impressed when I saw beautiful, water animals in the Oceanarium. It was incredible experience. I'll never forget charming view of the settng sun on the beach and of great taste of ice- cream. I am pleased that the weater was lovely. The views was magnificent and that is why I took quite a few photos. It was a great holiday!
Now I lie in front of my house and I am basking in the sun. This weekend I am going to go in the mountains, because I like nature. I hope that I will rest and I will get to know of new people.
I hope you'll come and visit in my city. Hope to hear from you.
All the best
Kasia
Wiem, że połowa z tego jest pewnie źle napisana, ale proszę, żeby ktoś mi to pomógł chociaż troche poprawić
Dear Ado (Ada)!
I am writing to thank you so much of spending time for you WITH ME. It was a (wg mnie nie powinno być) pleasure to meet you.
I was very pleased (ja bym napisała "I enjoyed sth", pleased jakos dziwnie brzmi i do tego raz piszesz z "to" raz z "from") to sunbathe for (przedimek) beach ("dla"? skąd ci się to bierze, to nawet nie jest przeniesienie z polskiego) as well from collecting shells. I'll never forget high wave (lmn) and of doing sand castles. It was visiting castle of Malbork (w ogóle tego nie rozumiem, brzmi jak nawiazanie do zamków na piasku), because I love old buildings. Monuments are impressive. I was very impressed when I saw beautiful, water animals in the Oceanarium. It was (...) incredible experience. I'll never forget charming (przedimek) view of the settng sun on the beach and of (przedimek) great taste of ice- cream. I am pleased that the weater (ort) was lovely. The views was (lmn) magnificent and that is why I took quite a few photos. It was a great holiday!
Now I lie (I'm lying) in (przedimek) front of my house and I am basking in the sun. This weekend I am going to go (walk) in the mountains, because I like (przedimek) nature. I hope that I will rest and I will get to know of new people.
I hope you'll come and visit (who) in my city. Hope to hear from you.
All the best
Kasia
edytowany przez ivonne: 25 maj 2012

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