opis dnia- sprawdz.

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Witam wszystkich !

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie mojego opisu dnia. :))

Hello ! I'm Nina ! This is my typical Saturday. I wake up at 7 o'clock. After I go to the bathroom and I wash myself, I brush my teeth. After that I go to the kitchen and I prepare my breakfast. I eat it and then I begin cleaning. I dust the table, vacuum the carpet and throw the garbage. Next I turn on the TV and I watch some programs. After I call to my bestfriend - we usually talk for more than an hour ! Then I go for a walk with my dog in the park and when we come home it's 7 o'clock. So I switch on my computer and chat with my friends on the Internet. Finally I go to the bed at about 11 o'clock.

Z góry dziękuję ! :)
'After' (tutaj masz zle, bo albo 'after x cos tam, albo inne slowo) I go to the bathroom and I wash myself, I brush my teeth.
I dust the table, vacuum the carpet and throw the garbage (ale gdzie, tutaj trzeba ...throw OUT the garbage). Next I turn on the TV and I watch 'some' (nie, poszukaj jakies inne slowo, to nie pasuje) 'programs' (tutaj programmes). After (ale czego? ) I call 'to' (niepotr) my best friend - we usually talk for more than an hour !

Z góry dziękuję ! :)[/quote]
Ok ślicznie dziękuję za tak szybką odpowiedź i pomoc ! :)

Jeszcze mam jedno pytanie - czy go home i come home to to samo, czyli wrócić do domu ?
Podobna roznica jak przy "przyjsc" czy "isc" /do domu/
tzn chyba na odwrot tak ? :)

Prosze o sprawdzenie jeszcze krotkich opisow osoby:

Marco is a student. He comes from Italy. He's Italian. He is 19 years old. He lives in the centre of Rome. He attends to the university at the faculty of Arts.

Katrin is a teacher of English. She comes from England. She's English. She is 29 years old. She lives in the street XXX . She teaches at the school.

I jeszcze takie zwroty jakby ktos mogl sprawdzić i dopisać to czego nie wiedziałam, to bede wdzieczna bardzo :)

1. Where are they ?
- They are at home / at the cinema / at the theatre / in the classroom / at the station.
2. Iść na nogach to bd - go on foot ?
3. Jechać metrem / autobusem - ?
4. Mieszkać w centrum - Live in the centre
5. Mieszkać poza miastem - ?

Z góry dziękuję !
He attends 'to the university at the faculty of Arts' (zrob to inaczej...he attends the Faculty of Arts at a University.

She lives 'in the street XXX' (tutaj masz zle, powinno byc ...she lives on xxxx Street) .

2. Iść na nogach to bd - go on foot ? tak
3. Jechać metrem / autobusem - ? travel ....
5. Mieszkać poza miastem - ? live ....
>>>>She lives in the street XXX
She lives in ....., at (number)...
She lives at (number) (street name)
She lives at (street name) (number), appartment x

5. live in the country(side)
3. lub: Take a bus / metro /mowi sie tak w UK?/
Proszę o sprawdzenie dialogu :

A: Excuse me, how can I get to the airport ?
B: You must take a train. (A jak powiedzieć " Musi PANI jechać pociągiem ? " )
A: And where I have to change it ?
B: In Bristol.
A: Ok and the last question... How long does the journey take ?
B: About 4 hours.
A: Thank you for the informations and help.
B: No problem, goodbye !

Z góry dziękuję :)

A: Excuse me, how can I get to the airport ?
B: You must take a train. (A jak powiedzieć " Musi PANI jechać pociągiem ? " ) TRAVEL/GO BY TRAIN
A: And where (brak czegos) I have to change it ?
B: In AT Bristol. (gdyz jestes na trasie do jakiegos punktu)
A: Ok and the last question... How long does the journey take ?
B: About 4 hours.
A: Thank you for the informations (to jest niepoliczalne) and help.
B: No problem, goodbye !

Where do I have to change ?
A z tymi informacjami to już nie wiem :(
Dziękuję bardzo !
informacje,, informacja = INFORMATION.
Cytat: stella19
Where do I have to change ?

You got it:)
Czy zdaniu z przesiadką mozna uzyc TRANSFER. /??/
Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie opisu osoby :)

This is my friend Diego. He's from Greece and he's thirteen years old. He's a student at an English school. His favourite sports are football and tennis. He has got black hair, dark brown eyes and a light brown complexion. He's rather short and slim.

Z góry dziękuję :)
Cytat: fui_eu
Czy zdaniu z przesiadką mozna uzyc TRANSFER. /??/

Bardziej z samolotami raczej
Cambridge Dic. uses bus in their example.
Nie tylko Cambridge to tak opisuje, wiem, ale mie sie tak wydaje
poza tym to troche sztywniesze niz 'change' mysle
czy opis kolegi powyzej jest w pelni poprawny ? :)
Looks OK.
1. Uzyskiwanie informacji

Bardzo bym prosiła o sprawdzenie dialogu z kina. :)

- Good morning !
- Good morning !
- Could you tell me please what's on today?
- Yes, today there are some films like: X , Y, Z
- What time does Y starts?
- It starts at 10 o'clock.
- OK ! I would like to buy two tickets for this film, one with the student's discount. How much is the ticket?
- It's 20 € totally.
- Can I pay by card?
- No, we accept only cash.
- Ok, I have some change.
- In which room is it on?
- It's on in the room number 4.
- OK thank you very much !
- It's no problem ! Have you a good film !

Z góry dziękuję :)
- Could you tell me please what's on today?
- 'Yes,' (to, jak dla mnie to jest bardzo oficjalne - lepiej...With pleasure) today 'there are some films' (niepotr) (lepiej...we are showing....) 'like' (no i po co to 'like' tutaj - co do cholery jasnej ono dodaje do zdania!!) : X , Y, Z
-- OK ! I would like to buy two tickets for this film, one with 'the' A student's discount. How much is the ticket?
- It's 20 € 'totally' (to jest zle slowo...lepiej in 'total').
- Can I pay by (no a gdzie jest przedimek? Poszedl sobie na nocny seans? 'card' (musisz napisac jaka to jest debit? credit? store?)?
- Ok, I have some 'change' (change to daje mi znac ze to sa drobne, ale na tickets teraz trzeba papierkowe - nie 'change' ale lepiej....money, cash) .
- In which room is it 'on' (zle slowo, tutaj IN)?
- It's on in 'the' (niepotr) room 'number' (mozna pominac, bo wiemy o co chodzi) 4.
- Have you a good 'film '' (to jest zle slowo, tutaj TIME)!

Czyli ma być : In which room is it in ? oraz It's on in room 4. ?

Cytat:
Have you a good 'film '' (to jest zle slowo, tutaj TIME)!
Tak w UK mowia?
Cytat: stella19
Czyli ma być : In which room is it in ? oraz It's on in room 4. ?
U nas w kinie typu multiplex, poszczegolne widownie nazywaja sie cinema 1, cinema 2, etc.
Cytat: fui_eu
Cytat:
Have you a good 'film '' (to jest zle slowo, tutaj TIME)!
Tak w UK mowia?

nie, nie - zle przeczytalam. Myslalam, ze pisze 'Have a good time', bo na koncu rozmowy tak by sie powiedzialo.

Co do widowni - mozna..room 1, room 2, - cinema 1, cinema 2 - a w Krakowie, to nawet poszczegolne widownie to maja swoje imiona...
Proszę o sprawdzenie dialogu w hotelu:

A: Good morning. Welcome to Alpin Hotel. May I help you?
B: Good morning. Do you have any rooms vacancies?
A: Single or double?
B: Double with a shower and a view of sea.
A: Yes, there are some rooms this type ( tego typu ). When do you want to arrive?
B: I'll be there on 20th July.
A: How long would you like staying here?
B: 5 days. I want to make a reservation ( na nazwisko Smith... ?)
A: OK, I made a reservation. Thank you ! Goodbye !
B: Thank you too. Goodbye !

Z góry dziękuję :)

A: Good morning. (IT'S A PLEASURE TO )Welcome (YOU) to Alpin Hotel. May I help you? ok
B: Good morning. Do you have any 'rooms' (niepotrz) vacancies?
A: Single or double? ok
B: Double with a shower and a view 'of' (inny preposition) (coś brak) sea. może: a sea view room ? a room that looks onto the sea itd.
A: Yes, there are some rooms (coś brak) this type. When do you want to arrive? ok
B: I'll be there on (cos brak) 20th (cos brak) July (lub: July 20)
A: How long would you like 'staying' (tutaj akurat potrzebujesz bezokolicznika z 'to') here?
B: 5 days. I want to make a reservation ( na nazwisko Smith... ?) IN THE NAME OF SMITH.
A: OK, 'I made a reservation' (gramatycznie ok, ale ona raczej tego nie powtórzy) DONE. Thank you ! Goodbye !
B: Thank you too. Goodbye !

Generalnie w dobrym kierunku idziesz :)
edytowany przez grudziu: 21 lut 2013
Cytat:
When do you want to arrive?
ja bym inaczej ujal.
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