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More and more people are using the most popular community portal – facebook. We can point out some advantages and disadvantages of this situation.
First of all, facebook can help be in touch with friends. We substitute a mobile phone or a instant messenger by it. Using this website is easier and faster. Secondly, thanks to this website we have the option of finding our old friends. It renew us contact people, which we didn't see for a few years. Moreover, we can find there a lot of information about interesting things. We follow there a site of favourite bands, singers or clubs. It help keep abreast of novelty.
On the other hand, people using facebook can have problem with making friends in real life. When someone spend too much time chatting in the Internet can't then get to know new people. Futhermore, many people become dependent on this. They right after their coming back to home from work whether school enter facebook and check who added something of a novelty. Therefore they are neglectful of one's duties. Finally, using the community portal is dangerous. When we add there too much information about our life, someone abuse it against us. We should too be careful with adding photos.
All things considered, it can be seen that this phenomenon has a lot of benefit; besides, it has also a few drawback. Using facebook can help us in everyday life, but it isn't always safe.