Oferta wycieczki - proszę o sprawdzenie

Zadanie polegało na opisaniu po angielski oferty wycieczki na tropikalne wyspy Vanuatu. Proszę o pilne sprawdzenie i dziękuję z góry.

Vanuatu is an island nation located in the South Pacific Ocean. Archipelago consisting of 82 relatively small, volcanic Islands. There are several active volcanoes in Vanuatu including several underwater ones. Clear, blue water, beautiful coral reefs, underwater volcanos and many shipwrecks makes Vanuatu a paradise for those who love diving. The professional instructors of diving will teach everyone who doesn’t have any experience in this kind of recreation. For those who want some extra features we have an extreme diving experience that is including underwater sightseeing of battleship from World War II which lie on the ocean floor. Every optional excursions that we offer is including insurance for every participant.
More about this offer you can find at our website or from guidebook about Vanuatu. It can be purchase in our travel agency or also on our website. Guidebook where you can find more about trip is tagged by image of aquanaut who is a logo of our offer.
We offer a price 3500 USD for two people for seven days. It is including an accommodation, food and local transport. For first two pairs that reserve a Vanuatu islands trip from our travel agency we will give a free tickets for a “Culture of Vanuatu trip”. It is a one day trip to one of the island where you will see a traditional local village where you experience a true Vanuatu sense from locals. Vanuatu islands trip is an unforgettable, exciting adventure that you can’t miss.

ale co tu sprawdzac, Wikipedia i podobne witryny.
Zaznacz złaski swojej te zdania, które sam napisałeś.
I nie proś o pilne sprawdzenie. My tu poświęcamy własny prywatny czas na pomoc tym, którzy pracują samodzielnie. Nie uważasz, że po 22.00 moglibyśmy zająć się własnymi sprawami?

Proszę o sprawdzenie gramatyki, 90% tekstu jest moje. Nie rozumiem czemu jesteś taki niemiły, nie chciałem nikogo urazić stwierdzeniem ,że potrzebuje tego pilnie.

ja widzę liczne wtręty z tekstów dostepnych w Internecie. Zaznacz, co jest Twoje, resztą nie będę się zajmowal, bo to nie Twoja praca.

Vanuatu is an island nation located in the South Pacific Ocean. Archipelago consisting of 82 relatively small, volcanic Islands. There are several active volcanoes in Vanuatu including several underwater ones. Clear, blue water, beautiful coral reefs, underwater volcanos and many shipwrecks makes Vanuatu a paradise for those who love diving. The professional instructors of diving will teach everyone who doesn’t have any experience in this kind of recreation. For those who want some extra features we have an extreme diving experience that is including underwater sightseeing of battleship from World War II which lie on the ocean floor. Every optional excursions that we offer is including insurance for every participant.
More about this offer you can find at our website or from guidebook about Vanuatu. It can be purchase in our travel agency or also on our website. Guidebook where you can find more about trip is tagged by image of aquanaut who is a logo of our offer.
We offer a price 3500 USD for two people for seven days. It is including an accommodation, food and local transport. For first two pairs that reserve a Vanuatu islands trip from our travel agency we will give a free tickets for a “Culture of Vanuatu trip”. It is a one day trip to one of the island where you will see a traditional local village where you experience a true Vanuatu sense from locals. Vanuatu islands trip is an unforgettable, exciting adventure that you can’t miss.


Pogrubiony tekst jest z wikipedii tylko tyle, reszta jest moja.

Clear, blue water, beautiful coral reefs, underwater volcanos and many shipwrecks 'makes' (dlaczego tu jest 3os.l.poj, jak masz 'volcanos-l. mn?) Vanuatu a paradise for those who love diving.
For those who want some extra features we have an extreme diving experience that 'is including' (nie, tutaj inaczej....includes) underwater sightseeing of (przedimek) battleship from World War II which 'lie' (jak jedenbattleship, to 3os.l.poj) on the ocean floor. Every optional 'excursions' (jak masz 'every' to nie moze byc 'excursions'-l. mn) that we offer 'is including' (nbie wiem dlaczego tak myslisz, jak tutaj wystarczy 'includes') insurance for every participant.
'More about this offer you can find' (to jest arse over tit...) 'at' ON our website or from (przedimek) guidebook about Vanuatu. It can be 'purchase' (zla forma mowy) in our travel agency or 'also' (niepotr) on our website. (przedimek) guidebook where you can find more about trip is tagged by (przedimek) image of (przedimek) aquanaut who is 'a logo of our offer' (cos tu nie tak).
'It is including' (i znowu to samo, tutaj ..includes) 'an' (zly przedimek) accommodation, food and local transport. For first two pairs that reserve a Vanuatu islands trip from our travel agency we will give a free 'tickets' (dlaczego l. mn-tickets, jak masz przedimek 'a' wczesniej) for a “Culture of Vanuatu trip”. It is a one day trip to one of the 'island' (tutaj l. mn) where you will see a traditional local village (cos brak) where you (cos brak) experience a true Vanuatu sense from (przedimek) locals.

Widac co jest twoje, bo kazde zdanie ma bledy.

Vanuatu is an island nation located in the South Pacific Ocean. Napisałeś cos takiego
Vanuatu jest narodem wyspiarskim połozonym na Oceanie Spokojnym.
1 Naród nie może byc zlokalizowany może najwyżej zamieszkiwac jakis teren
2 Vanuatu , to nie jest naród.
To takie tam przemyslenia do pierwszego zdania