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Hi Ann!
Do you remember when I said that I'm going to visit London? I will be there from *** to ****. The point is that I don't know where me and my friend can sleep. Could you recommend me hotel/motel where we can stay? My mother is a bit worry, because she heard that some ward in London isn't safety. In with part of city do you live? Can you help me find cheap hotel?

Z góry dziękuję za pomoc :)

Hi Ann!
Do you remember when I said that I {was} going to visit London? I will be there from *** to ****. The point is that I don't know where me and my friend can sleep. Could you recommend {a}hotel/motel where we can stay? My mother is a bit {worried} because she heard that some {districts} in London {aren't safe}. In {what} part of {the} city do you live? Can you help me find {a} cheap hotel?

bardzo dziękuję za pomoc ;)