Pyt maturalne

Proszę oo sprawdzenie odpowiedzi na pytania, bardzo mi zależy dlatego jeśli nie macie wystarczająco czasu to proszę o sprawdzenie chociaż części. Wiem że tego jest dużo, ale liczę że wspólnymi siłami mi pomożecię. Będę naprawdę bardzo, bardzo wdzięczna:)

1. Dream job
My dream job is hairdresser, because my passion is creating new hairstyle and dyeing hair. Moreover I think more and more people make use of hairdresser so this job is well-paid what is the next reason my choice. This job isn't hard and boring and gives a lot of joy from satisfied customers. I think I have all features to work in this job and I believe I will be a perfect hairdresser

2. Które sezonowe prace są najbardziej popularne wśród młodych
From my point of view the most popular work among young people are gardener, waiter, shop assistant and aupair . Aupairs are so popular because this job gives a posibility to learn English for free and visit new places and know new people. Work as a gardener is choosing for youn people because everybody can work, you don't have to have any skills. Work in shop and restaurant is so common because it is easy work.

3. Czy to jest dobry pomysł by wyjechać zagranicę i uczyć się języka
Yes, it is a very good idea to go abroad to learn foreign languages, because it is more effective way to learn a language. When you are in England you must talk and use English for example if you want buy ticket, go to the cinema, go to shopping. Moreover if you are in England you can fast pick up English.

4. Czy chciałbyś pracować jako wolontariusz a ciężko chorymi ludźmi
No I wouldn't like to work as a volunteered with seriously ill people because it is very responsible and exhausting job. Moreover I am not strong enough to see suffered people. It isn't my cup of tea.

5. Jaki powinien być dobry doktor
Good doctor must be responsible, hard working, competent and must have big knowledgeable. Good doctor should learn all life. Moreover he must take fast decision and health and life patients should be on first place, it should be more important than rules.

6. Zalety i wady studiowania i pracy w jednym czasie
The main advantage of working and studying at the same time is own money. If you work you don't have to ask you parents for money. What is more if you work you can gain priceless experience and it can be useful to get well-paid job in future. Work and own money are the first step to be independent. On the other hand there are many disadvantages. When I work I am too exhausted and I can't focus on my teaching so I have worse grands. Moreover when I work too long I haven't time to private life.

7. Dlaczego wiele młodych ludzi wyjeżdża zagranicę by znaleźć pracę tam?
Many young people go abroad to find a job there because in other countries is biggest job market and salaries are higher than in Poland. What is more it is a great occasion to improve your languages skills and gain priceless experience

8. Co robię by być Eco?
To be Eco I sort rubbish, turn off the light when I leave a room, take shower instead of bath and I choose ecofriendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags. What is more I save paper by writing on both sides of the paper and I more often choose bike than car

Podbijam i wręcz błagam o pomoc:)

My dream job is _ hairdresser, because my passion is creating _ new hairstyle and dyeing hair. Moreover, I think more and more people make use of _ hairdresser, so this job is well-paid, 'what' WHICH is the next 'reason my choice' (nie rozumiem) ASSET/ADVANTAGE OF THE JOB. This job isn't hard 'and' OR boring and gives YOU a lot of joy OF SEEING from satisfied customers . I think I have all features to 'work in this job' (masło maślane) and I believe I will be a perfect hairdresser.

Ach te przedimki, zawsze je zapominam:)
Chodziło mi o to że to jest następnym powodew dlaczego moim wymarzonym zawodem jest fryzjerka. Teraz jak to czytam kolejny raz sama doszłam do wniosku że mogłam to inaczej napisać trochę.

Dziękuję bardzo, bardzo chociaż za sprawdzenie tego jednego pytania;) A może tak jeszcze jedno?

1. Dream job
My dream job is TO BE A hairdresser, because my passion is creating new hairstyleS and dyeing hair. Moreover I think more and more people make use of A hairdresser so this job is well-paid 'what' (what nie jest zawsze odpowiednikiem 'co' w jez. polskim, tutaj WHICH) is the next reason FOR my choice. This job isn't hard and boring and gives YOU a lot of joy from satisfied customers. I think I have 'all features' (the right predisposition) to work in this job and I believe THAT I will be a perfect hairdresser

2. Które sezonowe prace są najbardziej popularne wśród młodych
From my point of view the most popular work among young people are BEING A gardener, waiter, shop assistant and aupair . Aupairs are so popular because this job gives 'a' THE posibility to learn English for free and visit new places and GET TO know new people. WorkING as a gardener is 'choosing for youn' BEING CHOSEN BY YOUNG people because 'everybody' ANYBODY can work, you don't have to have any skills. Work in A shop and A restaurant is so common because it is easy work.

3. Czy to jest dobry pomysł by wyjechać zagranicę i uczyć się języka
Yes, it is a very good idea to go abroad to learn foreign languages, because it is (przedimek) more effective way to learn a language. When you are in England you must talk and use English for example if you want buy(przedimek) ticket, go to the cinema, go 'to' (niepotr) shopping. Moreover if you are in England you can 'fast' QUICKLY pick up English.

4. Czy chciałbyś pracować jako wolontariusz a ciężko chorymi ludźmi
No I wouldn't like to work as a 'volunteered' VOLUNTEER with seriously ill people because it is (przedimek) very responsible and exhausting job. Moreover I am not strong enough to see sufferING people.

5. Jaki powinien być dobry doktor
(przedimek) good doctor must be responsible, hard working, competent and must have 'big' EXTENSIVE 'knowledgeable' (zla czesc mowy tu KNOWLEDGE) . (przedimek) good doctor should learn all HIS life. Moreover he must take 'fast' QUICK decisionS and (przedimek) health and life OF patients should be 'on first place' HIS PRIORITY, 'it' THAT should be more important than ANY rules.

6. Zalety i wady studiowania i pracy w jednym czasie
The main advantage of working and studying at the same time is HAVING own money.
What is more if you work you can gain priceless experience and it can be useful (tu brakuje pare slow....when you want) to get (przedimek) well-paid job in (przedimek) future. Work and own money are the first stepS (bo to 2 czynniki) to be independent.
When I work I am too exhausted and I can't focus on my 'teaching' STUDIES so I have worse 'grands' GRADES. Moreover when I work too long I haven't ANY time 'to' FOR private life.

7. Dlaczego wiele młodych ludzi wyjeżdża zagranicę by znaleźć pracę tam?
Many young people go abroad to find a job 'there' (niepotr) because in other countries THERE is (przedimek) 'biggest' (wg mnie zle slowo, daj larger) job market and salaries are higher than in Poland.

8. Co robię by być Eco?
To be Eco I sort rubbish, turn off the light when I leave a room, take (przedimek) shower instead of (przedimek) bath and I choose ecofriendly shopping bags instead of plastic bags. What is more I save paper by writing on both sides of the paper and I more often choose (przedimek) bike than (przedimek) car.

Masz problemy z przedimkami - popracuj nad nimi.

Jak tu weszłam nie mogłam uwierzyć własnym oczom, że ktoś wkońcu 'zlitował' się i postanowił mi pomóc i to nie tylko po części, tylko w całosci.

Przedimki-mój słaby punkt od początków nauki angielskiego. Chociaż teraz gdy już jestem bardziej świadoma mojej słabości próbuje ją wyeliminować, chociaż póki co bez skutku;)

Niewiem jak mam dziękować, żebym mogła w pełni odwdzięczyć się, chyba się nie da:)
Jesteś WIELKA, stokrotnie dziękuję, niech Cię sławią wszystkie narody;)

Moja nagroda bedzie, jak nauczysz sie tych przedimkow i kiedys sie tu pochwalisz na forum....:-)