Potrzebuje pilnej POmocy!!! Błagam!!!! Notkka reklamowa

Kochani eksperci. Szef dał mi za zadanie stworzyć notkę reklamową przykładowego produktu ( oczywiście wymyślił produkt, którego w ogóle nie znam) po angielsku :( Potrzebuje ją na jutrzejszą prezentację, ale nie owijając w bawełnę jestem tylko stażystką, która o marketingu ma średnie pojęcie a pisanie po angielsku w ogóle mi nie idzie ( Nie wiem jak on w ogóle wpadł na to żeby mi coś takiego zadać) Będę wdzięczna za wszelką pomoc i skorygowanie najbardziej rażących błędów ( moja kompromitacja będzie może mniejsza dzięki waszej pomocy)

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Take care of your well-being, health and beauty of GlossyBox.
Choosing the right mascara, lipstick color, nail polish or the right foundation shade can be a difficult task, especially in crowded shopping malls. With GlossyBox You can test the best on the market cosmetic products to skincare and makeup without even leaving home. You will get five specially selected products each month, which contain not only make up assesorise, but also the skincare and beauty cosmetics for the face. Cause a bit of pleasure to Yourself every month and get a bit of luxury in the form of GlossyBox: box filled with the best cosmetic products.GlossyBox uses a wide selection of luxury beauty brands including bliss, Clarins, dermalogica, MeMeMe and Xen-Tan
Beautiful hair, amazing skin, gorgeous lips, Stunning You! It's all waiting for you inside GlossyBox. Now with GlossyBox Voucher to get all this pleasure is even easier.

What does GlossyBox Voucher gives to You?

Thanks to Glossy Box Voucher You can recive new cosmetic products sample with a discount. The doors to fascinating world of body care and make up, are open even wider.
An additional profit of using Glossy Box Voucher is an extra suprise gift You will find in Your sample box.
If You want to surprise Your mother, daughter or a best friend GlossyBox Voucher is a fantastic idea for a present.



How to get a Voucher?

There is nothing easier than that! Just fill up the contact form and follow the instructions . It will not take more time than just five minutes to buy a Voucher and receive cosmetics even up to 20% off.

So, next time you want your money to go further with GlossyBox, then remember that with GlossyBox Voucher You will receive best discounts and offers.




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Take care of your well-being, health and beauty 'of GlossyBox.' (tutaj to niema dla mniue sensu)
With GlossyBox 'You' (dlaczego 'you', ktory sie pisze mala litera, masz napisana duze litera) can test the best on the market cosmetic products 'to skincare and makeup' (tego nie rozumiem) without even leaving home. You will get five specially selected products each month, which contain not only make up' assesorise' (zle slowo), but also 'the' (niepotr) skincare and beauty cosmetics for the face. 'Cause a bit of pleasure' (bardzo dziwne jak dla mnie, dlaczego nie...Indulge yourself...) to 'Yourself' (dlaczego duza litera) every month and get a bit of luxury in the form of GlossyBox: box filled with the best cosmetic products.GlossyBox uses a wide selection of luxury beauty brands including 'bliss' (nazwa wlasna - duza litera), Clarins, 'dermalogica' (nazwa wlasna?), MeMeMe and Xen-Tan
'Beautiful hair, amazing skin, gorgeous lips, Stunning You' (nie rozumiem czy to ma byc zdaniem?)! Now with GlossyBox Voucher 'to get' GETTING all this pleasure is even easier.

What does GlossyBox Voucher 'gives' (dlaczego to jest w 3os.l.poj?) to 'You' (mala litera)?

Thanks to Glossy Box Voucher 'You' (mala litera) can 'recive' (ortog) new (you receive SAMPLES, i dlatego 'slowo samples' powinno byc pierwsze) cosmetic products sample with a discount.
An additional 'profit' (calkowicie zle slowo, tutaj 'advantage') of using Glossy Box Voucher is an extra suprise gift 'You' (mala litera) will find in 'Your' mala litera) sample box.
If 'You' (mala litera) want to surprise 'Your' (mala litera) mother, daughter or a best friend GlossyBox Voucher is a fantastic idea for a present.

Just 'fill up' b(you fill up your car at a gas station, tutaj COMPLETE) the contact form and follow the instructions . It will not take more 'time' (niepotr) than just five minutes to buy a Voucher and receive cosmetics WITH even up to 20% off.

So, next time you want your money to go further 'with GlossyBox' (niepotr), then remember that with GlossyBox Voucher 'You' (mala litera) will receive best discounts and offers.