European Union

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Poland became a member country of the European Union on 1st May 2004. For our country and citizens it was the beginning of a new era. Personally, I think that is more advantageous than disadvantageous

The most advantageous are better possibilities for young people, who want to go abroad to study or find a better job. In my opinion , it’s much easier to find a job abroad. we can travel over the Europe without passport. Our west boarder are open and we have a chance to look for some better places to live. Suddenly there will be one big Europe, not only separate countries.

In addition, Join the EU gave us many profits. Countries belong to EU are open the door to new markets for Polish corporations. At the same time, the quality of Polish products will grow up because they will have to compete with products from the other union countries.

Poland has received money from European Union. So now we have money to repair our roads and build new highways. This operation will improve communication.

After some time, it will be easier to make businesses in Poland than it has been before. Our economy will become stronger thanks to the European Union.

In conclusion, I hope that accession of Poland to the EU will still be good for our country and we have to take our chance and make the most of it.

For 'our' (nie dawaj 'our' bo nie zawsze wiemy kto to pisze, tutaj 'the') country and ITS citizens it was the beginning of a new era. Personally, I think that 'is more advantageous than disadvantageous' (tutaj cos jest nie tak - w ogole nie wiem o co chodzi)

The most advantageous (ale co?) are better possibilities for young people, who want to go abroad to study or find a better job.
'we' (nie uzywaj 'we', bo w jaki sposob wiesz, ze osoba czytajaca jest mloda-) can travel (cos brak) over 'the' (niepotr) Europe without (cos brak) passport. Our west 'boarder' (zle slowo) are open and 'we' (popraw) have a chance to look for some better places to live. Suddenly there 'will be' (will be - czy juz jest?) one big Europe, not only separate countries.

In addition, 'Join' (zle slowo) the EU gave us 'many' (uzyj inne slowo) profits. Countries (cos brak) belong to EU 'are' (niepotr) openED the door to new markets for Polish corporations. At the same time, the quality of Polish products 'will' (za silne slowo - napisz 'is likely to) grow 'up' (niepotr) because they will have to compete with products from the other union countries.

Poland has received money from (cos brak) European Union.

After some time, it will be easier to 'make businesses' (ujmij to jakos inaczej) in Poland than it has been before.
In conclusion, I hope that accession of Poland to the EU will still be good for our country (do kiedy?) and we have to take our chance and make the most of it.

Dziekuje bardzo, dostosowałam sie juz do wskazówek ;)