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This holiday was the worst in the Ben life. It happened last year. It was n July Ben with his friend Weronika and Witek went on holiday in Spain. All were exicted the possibility of travel. It was their first voyage abroad. When they arrived by coach to Loret d Mar afte the long and exhausted travel they went to the accommodation in their hotel Suny Beach.They went to the room and they were happy it looked motre comfortable than in the photos on the internet. After this time friend went at the swimming pool. Day elapsed very fast on subathing,sightseeing and going to club.When Ben wanted to paid for the drink he picked up hand to the wallet he was shocked.Ben immediately was going to the firned and asked about the wallet.

This holiday was the worst in the (przed imionami raczej nie dajemy the) Ben's life. It happened last year. It was in July (kiedy) Ben with his friend (liczba mnoga) Weronika and Witek went on holiday in (do) Spain.

Everybody was / All of them were exicted - literówka about this travel journey. (Travel to tylko czasownik w j.ang)

Przepraszam - znalazłam w słowniku, że travel też się stosuje jako rzeczownik więc OK.

It was their first voyage (a long journey, especially by ship ) więc tu lepiej journey abroad. When they arrived by coach to Loret d Mar afte - literówka the a long and exhausted (oznacza zmęczony; ty chcesz męczący - zmień końcówkę) travel they went to the accommodation in (bez tego - dziwnie brzmi) their hotel Suny (literówka) Beach.

They went to the room and they were happy (dodałabym ponieważ) it looked motre (literówka) comfortable than in the photos on the internet. After this time (lepiej Then) the friend (liczba mnoga) went at to the swimming pool.
Po angielsku zazwyczaj mówi się: go to the (cinema / opera / theatre / hotel ....)

Their day elapsed very fast on subathing, sightseeing and going to club (dałabym liczbę mnogą). Once when Ben wanted to paid (po wanted to wstawiamy bezokolicznik nie czasownik w czasie Past Simple) for a drink he picked up (podniósł rękę do góry??) hand to reached for the wallet and he was shocked. Immediately he was going (poszedł a nie chodził ) to the firned (literówka) and asked about the wallet.