SZYK ZDANIA: [2- The last holiday][1- I
was spending (Simple Past)]
on (zle slowo) the Baltic
See (ort). Nowe zdanie:
Bylam tam... for two weeks.
During this time I met (przedimek?) amazing boy. His name
is (Simple Past) John and I fell in love with him. One day, before he
come out to (wystarczy: WENT) home, John gave me (przedimek?) little gift and told me : "Thanks
of (TO) this thing you will remember
about me".
It was our photo
with (IN) (przedimek) frame. (przedimek) Photo frame is big
with dark bottle green (co masz na mysli?) and made from oak by John. The picture shows me and John and was taken on the beach during sunset. We are
in hug ("hug" to tez czasownik. Sprobuj: "obejmujemy sie" uzywajac Present Continuous).
John looks very handsome but I look
s (???) like (przedimek) wet chicken . On the whole (przedimek) photo in nice but I can't
see on (co masz na mysli?) my facial expression, posture and terrible clothes,
bacause (ort) when somebody
taken (Simple Past) this photo I was
during (zle slowo: ON) the way to the hostel from (przedimek) birthday party, where
quest organised "War on the cake" (co masz na mysli?) and I
was glued hair and dirty dress (sprobuj inaczej: moje wlosy byly zlepione i moja sukienka byla brudna). Jonh only came
for me (TO PICK ME UP) so he was clean.
Now the picture is hanging on the wall and I have to look at
this (lepiej: IT) all time. I hate it but
on the picture is my lover (SZYK! Poza tym: IN the picture. Zamiast "lover", moze lepiej "LOVE"?). I hope we
will meet next holiday and I can
do (zle slowo: TAKE) (przedimek) new better photo together.
If I have another photo with John I can
threw away this (po "can" bezokolicznik. Zmien tez szyk) but (dodaj: AT THE MOMENT) I have nothing
related with (lepiej:
co mi przypomina o) him.