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temat: czy warto organizowac miedzynarodowe spotrowe wdarzenia w kraju?

Sport is very essentian in life.By dint of it you can keep fit and relax. A lots of people do sport, so anather group of people watch them. Nowadays is more and more international sport competitions and many country want to organize it. This is connected with pluses but also minuses.

First of all, organization this kind of events can be profitable. Tourists arrive to this place, where are competitions, buy lots of things for example food and souvenirs, so country earn money. Moreover, cities get finances from UE to do more new roads. By dint of it , countries are more industrialm, modern and moving through the country coulb be more comfortale. The next adventage is that this kind of events make that cities will be famous. Culture and traditions will be known abroad and in futere people will want to come to this place.

There are disadventages, too. Firstly, organization international events is very responsibility. Sometimes buildings could be not finished on time, so another countries could slander and laugh at organizaters. Another problem is that tourist could do not come and consequentely country could lose money. International sports competitions are also associated with rows and flighting. Riot could be have wrong influence on opinion about country. In spite of it, organization this events is connected with a lots of foregain people, so in whole country could be trrafic jams. The consequence of it is that moving throught the cities could be very difficult and time-consusming.

All in all, organization this kind of events has got cons and prons. People should remember about this before make a decision.


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Sport is very essential in life.By dint of it you can keep fit and relax. A lots of people do sport, so another group of people watch them. Nowadays is more and more international sport competitions and many country want to organize it. This is connected with pluses but also minuses.

First of all, organization this kind of events can be profitable. Tourists arrive to this place, where are competitions, buy lots of things for example food and souvenirs, so country earns money. Moreover, cities get finances from UE to do more new roads. By dint of it , countries are more industrial, modern and moving through the country could be more comfortale. The next advantage is that this kind of events makes that cities will be famous. Culture and traditions will be known abroad and in the future people will want to come to this place.

There are disadvantages, too. Firstly, organization international events is very responsibility. Sometimes buildings could be not finished on time, so another countries could slander and laugh at organizaters. Another problem is that tourist could do not come and consequentely country could lose money. International sports competitions are also associated with rows and flighting. Riot could be have wrong influence on opinion about country. In spite of it, organization this events is connected with a lots of foregain people, so in whole country could be trrafic jams. The consequence of it is that moving throught the cities could be very difficult and time-consusming.

All in all, organization this kind of events has got cons and prons. People should remember about this before make a decision.

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