Proszę o sprawdzenie eseju- Hamlet

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What are the possible sources of Hamlet's madness? If the madness is faked, what are the reasons for it?

The dictionary defines madness as, “1. The quality or condition of being insane, 2. Great folly, 3. Fury; rage, 4. Enthusiasm; excitement..” William Shakespeare, the writer of the tragic play Hamlet leaves the audience to decide whether Hamlet is truly mad or not. Sources of Hamlet's madness can find in the death of his father- the King Hamlet, a premature marriage Hamlet's mother of uncle Claudius as well as unrequited love for Ophelia.
First of all, Hamlet is forced to act insane in order to find out the truth of his father's death who appears to him as a ghost. This raises the first bit of suspicion of madness. Moreover, the death of King Hamlet left a lot of considerable damage on Hamlet, he begins to think of suicide. Secondly, Hamlet is melancholy, bitter and cynical, full of hatred for his uncle and disgust at his mother for marrying him. Hamlet feels betrayed by his mother and is enraged with her therefore, he suffers great mental anguish. Another instance of madness in Hamlet is found in Ophelia, Hamlet’s true love. Before the tragedy began, Hamlet and Ophelia were already in love, but then Hamlet accuses Ophelia of being dishonest and verbally abuses her. He feels let down by Ophelia and finally swearing his love to her. Most importantly, Hamlet has decided to pretend to be mad for his own safety so that he can plan secretly to murder Claudius without raising the suspicions of those around him.
Finally Hamlet’s feigned insanity comes from his passion to get revenge and grief over his father’s death. He has shown mental instability and madness, caused by his immediate family and loved woman.
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Cytat: marlena6666
The dictionary JEST JEDEN NA SWIECIE? defines madness as, “1. The quality or condition of being insane, 2. Great folly, 3. Fury; rage, 4. Enthusiasm; excitement..” William Shakespeare, TU SIE ZACZYNA APPOSITIONAL PHRASE, A GDZIE SIE KONCZY? the writer of the tragic play Hamlet leaves the audience =ZOSTAWIA WIDOWNIĘ, ZEBY ZDECYDOWAC to decide whether Hamlet is truly mad or not. Sources of Hamlet's madness can find =ZRODLA MOGĄ ZNALEŹĆ in the death of his father- the King Hamlet, a premature marriage MASZ TAKIE PROBLEMY Z DOPELNIACZAMI CZY TO TRANSLATOR? Hamlet's mother of uncle Claudius as well as unrequited love for Ophelia.
First of all, Hamlet is forced to act insane in order to find out the truth of<-INNY PRZYIMEK his father's death who ODNOSI SIE DO OJCA, PRAWDA? appears to him as a ghost. This raises the first bit of suspicion of madness. Moreover, the death of King Hamlet left a lot of considerable DUŻO ZNACZNEGO? damage on Hamlet, he begins to think of suicide O, WIDZE ZWIAZEK ZDANIA Z TERAZNIEJSZOSCIA (JAKA OPISUJESZ), CO Z TEGO WYNIKA DLA UZYCIA CZASOW W PIERWSZEJ CZESCI ZDANIA? . Secondly, Hamlet is melancholy=MELANCHOLIA, bitter and cynical, full of hatred for his uncle and disgust at his mother for marrying him. Hamlet feels betrayed by his mother and is enraged with her therefore<-TO NIE JEST SPOJNIK, WSTAW POWAZNIEJSZA INTERPUNKCJE PRZED TYM SLOWEM, he suffers great mental anguish. Another instance=PRZYKLAD of madness in Hamlet is found in Ophelia, Hamlet’s true love. Before the tragedy began, Hamlet and Ophelia were already in love TU PRZESZLY, A ZARAZ TERAZNIEJSZY, but then Hamlet accuses Ophelia of being dishonest and verbally abuses her. He feels let down by Ophelia and finally swearing SWEARING WIAZE SIE Z 'BY'? his love to her. Most importantly, Hamlet has decided DLACZEGO NAGLE PRESENT PERFECT to pretend to be mad for his own safety so that he can plan secretly to murder Claudius without raising the suspicions of those around him. PISZESZ O MOZLIWYCH POWODACH RZECZYWISTEGO SZALENSTWA, A POTEM NAGLE 'NAJWAZNIEJSZE, ZE CHCE UDAWAC' - BRAK LOGIKI
Finally Hamlet’s feigned insanity comes from his passion to get revenge and grief over his father’s death. He has shown mental instability and madness, caused by his immediate family and loved woman. PIERWSZE ZDANIE JEST O UDAWANIU, A DRUGIE O RZECZYWISTYM SZALENSTWIE. BRAK WYRAZNEJ KONKLUZJI ALBO CHOCBY STWIERDZENIA, ZE TROCHE UDAJE, A TROCHE NAPRAWDE ZWARIOWAL.
Cytat: mg
The dictionary JEST JEDEN NA SWIECIE?

tutaj mg masz uzycie generyczne odnoszace sie do slownika jako klasy - uzycie A dictionary w takim zdaniu byloby nieodpowiednie
http://references-definitions.blurtit.com/32804/how-does-a-dictionary-define-qualitative

a tutaj?
tez nie pasi
masz definicje z konkretnego slownika, to nie jest uzycie generyczne
a dictionary - jakiekolwiek dictionary - an online dictionary, pocket dictionary, glossary

ja to tak rozumiem
jezeli ktos mowi The dictionary defines... to dla niego nie jest istota przekazania informacji o jakims konkretnym slowniku, ale o zrodle definicji, jakim jest 'slownik'
dla niego i dla jego rozmowcy jasne jest z kontekstu srodowiskowego, ze nie ma tutaj mowy o jakims szczegolnym slowniku; jezeli w szerszym kontekscie byla wczesniej mowa o jakims slowiku, wowczas the odnosiloby sie do tego slownika
Cytat: zielonosiwy
a dictionary - jakiekolwiek dictionary - an online dictionary, pocket dictionary, glossary

ja to tak rozumiem

to jest zrozumiale

A/The dictionary is a mine of information = Any dictionary is a mine of information
ależ można tu spokojnie użyć przedimka nieokreslonego!
jakis slownik definiuje slowo szalenstwo jako...
vs
cos takiego, jak slownik definiuje slowo szalenstwo jako...

roznica jest
engee, you must make up your mind, you're either a linguistic relativist or fierce grammarian : }
to jest praca na zajecia na studiach, nie mozna sobie pozwalac na takie uogolnienia. Albo odsylacz za definicja, albo spokojnie 'a'.
nie wiem, jaki ma miec zwiazek, czy jest to praca na zajecia na studiach, czy cos innego
tutaj chodzi o sens tego, co chcesz przekazac
W pracy na zajęcia na studiach wymagana jest dokladnosc cytowania.
czyli The dictinary bedzie zle? No dla mnie takie podejscie do tematu jest niepoprawne
To miłe, że znasz pojęcie generic reference, ale w pracy naukowej nie ma czegoś takiego jak 'cytowanie z generycznego slownika". Albo studentka poda odsyłacz za definicją, albo napisze 'a dicitonary' (odsylacz tez moze podac).
Znajomosc regulek poprawnosci gramatycznej to za malo.
nie pojmuje, dlaczego generic reference ma byc tutaj zlym device, skoro jest poprawne :~
Załączam tekst z moimi poprawkami (pogrubione). Proszę spojrzeć czy będą poprawne.
A dictionary defines madness as, “1. The quality or condition of being insane, 2. Great folly, 3. Fury; rage, 4. Enthusiasm; excitement..” William Shakespeare, the writer of the tragic play “Hamlet” leaves the audience’s to decide whether Hamlet is truly mad or not. Hamlet's madness sources we can find in the death of his father- the King Hamlet, a premature Hamlet’s mother marriage of uncle Claudius as well as unrequited love for Ophelia.
First of all, Hamlet is forced to act insane in order to find out the truth about his father's death who (ojciec pojawia się jako duch) appears to him as a ghost. This raises the first bit of suspicion of madness. Moreover, the death of King Hamlet has left a considerable damage on Hamlet, he begins to think of suicide. Secondly, Hamlet is melancholic, bitter and cynical, full of hatred for his uncle and disgust at his mother for marrying him. Hamlet feels betrayed by his mother and is enraged with her consequently/ that’s why, he suffers great mental anguish. In addition Hamlet’s madness is found in Ophelia, Hamlet’s true love. Before the tragedy began, Hamlet and Ophelia were already in love, but then Hamlet accused Ophelia of being dishonest and verbally abused her. He feels let down by Ophelia, he gets mad and angry at her and finally cursing his love to her. On the other hand Hamlet’s madness seems to be faked. He decides to pretend to be mad for his own safety so that he can plan secretly to murder Claudius without raising the suspicions of those around him.
To sum up, genuinely Hamlet has shown mental instability and madness, caused by his immediate family and loved woman nevertheless, Hamlet’s feigned insanity comes from his passion to get revenge and grief over his father’s death.
Cytat: marlena6666
A dictionary defines madness as, “1. The quality or condition of being insane, 2. Great folly, 3. Fury; rage, 4. Enthusiasm; excitement..” William Shakespeare, the writer of the tragic play “Hamlet” leaves the audience’s to decide whether Hamlet is truly mad or not. Hamlet's madness sources DODALES 'WE'. DOBRZE, ALE PRZENIES DOPELNIENIE ZA ORZECZENIE I NIEMUSISZ USUWAC 'OF' we can find in the death of his father- the King Hamlet, a premature Hamlet’s mother =MATKA PRZEDWCZESNEGO HAMLETA. NAPRAWDE MASZ PROBLEM Z DOPELNIACZAMi; NIE PAMIETASZ O 'OF'marriage of uncle Claudius =MALZENSTWO WUJA KLAUDIUSZA, A NIE 'Z WUJEM' as well as unrequited love for Ophelia.
First of all, Hamlet is forced to act insane in order to find out the truth about his father's death who (ojciec pojawia się jako duch A ZE ZDANIA WYNIKA, ZE SMIERC POJAWIA SIE JAKO DUCH) appears to him as a ghost. This raises the first bit of suspicion of madness. Moreover, the death of King Hamlet has left SIMPLE PRESENT a considerable damage on Hamlet, he begins to think of suicide. Secondly, Hamlet is melancholic, bitter and cynical, full of hatred for his uncle and disgust at his mother for marrying him. Hamlet feels betrayed by his mother and is enraged with her consequently/ that’s why MIALES POPRAWIC INTERPUNKCJE, ZMIANA SLOWA NIE LIKWIDUJE PROBLEMU INTERPUNKCJI. NB. 'THAT'S WHY' JEST ZBYT POTOCZNE NA TAKI TEKST, he suffers great mental anguish. In addition Hamlet’s madness NAPISALES: 'SZALENSTWO HAMLETA MOZNA ZNALEZC W OFELII' is found in Ophelia, Hamlet’s true love. Before the tragedy began, Hamlet and Ophelia were already in love, but then Hamlet accused Ophelia of being dishonest and verbally abused her. He feels let down by Ophelia, he gets mad and angry at her and finally cursing NAPISALES: GNIEWA SIE NA NIA I OSTATECZNIE PRZEKLINAJACY' his love to her. On the other hand Hamlet’s madness seems to be faked. He decides to pretend to be mad for his own safety so that he can plan secretly to murder Claudius without raising the suspicions of those around him.
To sum up, genuinely Hamlet has shown mental instability and madness, caused by his immediate family and loved woman nevertheless TU TEZ PROBLEM Z INTERPUNKCJA., Hamlet’s feigned insanity comes from his passion to get revenge and grief over his father’s death.
ZAKONCZENIE NADAL JEST NIELOGICZNIE: RZECZYWISCIE WYKAZAL NISTABILNOSC UMYSLOWA, JEDNAK JEGO UDAWANE SZALENSTWO... - NADAL NIE WIEM, CZY ZWARIOWAL NAPRAWDE, CZY UDAWAL.
Zakończenie: To sum up, Hamlet has shown a true mental instability and madness, caused by his immediate family and loved woman. Nevertheless his passion to get revenge and grief over his father’s death caused the restoration of rational thinking then his insanity was feigned.
Ok. teraz lepiej, ale przed then wstaw kropkę, a jeszcze lepiej napisz 'From then on...'
Dziękuje serdecznie za sprawdzenie :)
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